The divine collapse

Once there was a debate in the lost paradise,
All the heavenly bodies are sitting in disguise.

The muscle flexing was seemed to be the only priorities,
The stars tried to take over the show as they were in majorities.

The Sun was smiling at these herds and their counterparts,
The moon looked at the firing Sun sitting in cold altar.

The moon was furious on the other hands to disregard their presence,
The Sun hesitate to enter into this fight of crown with diligence.

The moon asked the Sun to protest against these twinkling stars,
The Sun smiled and said
"We are neither near nor they so far."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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