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The Dive

I dove into myself today
And fought the rising tide
Of apathy and ignorance
That I had once denied.

I swam on through my waves of thought
And explored these depths of mind
To give my world some clarity
Among the ill-defined.

I plunged myself into the flow
And embraced the inner me:
The good, the bad, the oh so sad;
The things I’d always be.

I pushed on through the waters deep
And came out the other side
With understanding of myself
To act as my new guide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/29/2011 8:14:00 AM
nice writing! i love the diving analogy and the rhyme flows very well. i really enjoyed this poem!
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Date: 10/29/2011 8:02:00 AM
great flow and rhyme....enjoyed the ride of introspection. Welcome to the soup!!
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