The Distant Light

Sadness takes its cheerles flight again
 As these tears I try to fight again

 Its hard to even comprehend
 If things will become right again 

 Time will heal the heart's sorrow
 Until then, pain becomes my plight again 

Cherished memories I hold dear
 Waiting for the dawn to shine bright again

 Finding comfort in the scriptures
 Its truth will bring the light again

 9-10-2020
 Ghazal Contest
 Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/3/2020 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Joseph May
Date: 10/4/2020 5:12:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Silent..
Date: 9/16/2020 2:23:00 AM
Grief can be draining, but glad to know you find comfort in the Scriptures, Joseph:) short and touching ghazal:)
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Date: 9/13/2020 7:45:00 AM
The scriptures are comforting Joseph and you will get comfort and peace of mind from them, meanwhile memories will always stay, and that is sweet and kind and very beautiful. Great Ghazal and best wishes for the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/11/2020 7:58:00 PM
"Finding comfort in the scriptures" Yes, I know this to be true. I can feel the pain in your heart. My eyes are misty. I am holding your words so close. You are in my thoughts. ~ Brandy
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Joseph May
Date: 9/12/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thank you Brandy
Date: 9/11/2020 2:59:00 PM
Well done. I love the ending too :)
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Joseph May
Date: 9/12/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 9/11/2020 6:03:00 AM
You got the right tone, Joseph--emotive bounce--well done!
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Joseph May
Date: 9/12/2020 6:04:00 AM
Thank yo Vijay
Date: 9/11/2020 12:50:00 AM
You made great sadness poetic, nice poem. xoxo peace and love
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Joseph May
Date: 9/12/2020 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Aurore
Date: 9/10/2020 10:59:00 PM
I have always found writing ghazals difficult. You did a great job. Luck with the contest. ~~
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Joseph May
Date: 9/12/2020 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Victor
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