The Disappointed Baseball Player

Not all my hits are home runs,
many of them miss the bat;
specators respond with boos...
right there I expect to lose,
and getting angry, I toss my cap.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Andrew in John Freeman's contest "Limerick""Choose your own subject and Create your own Category". Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 1:30 PM
Congrats, Andy. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 12:01 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this really original entry.. enjoy another big win my friend..on this happy Sunday.. with luv..
Fraser Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 4:56 AM
Nice sporty Limerick Andrew. congrats on your win in John's fine Limerick contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 11:43 PM
A witty one, Andrew, My man. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 5:19 AM
A nice pen picture of the baseball player. Good luck in the contest, Andrew
Arteaga Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 12:18 AM
poor guy! good poem
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