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The Disappointed Baseball Player

Not all my hits are home runs, many of them miss the bat; specators respond with boos... right there I expect to lose, and getting angry, I toss my cap.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/2/2010 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Andrew in John Freeman's contest "Limerick""Choose your own subject and Create your own Category". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2010 1:30:00 PM
Congrats, Andy. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/1/2010 12:01:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this really original entry.. enjoy another big win my friend..on this happy Sunday.. with luv..
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Date: 8/1/2010 4:56:00 AM
Nice sporty Limerick Andrew. congrats on your win in John's fine Limerick contest >> James
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Date: 7/31/2010 11:43:00 PM
A witty one, Andrew, My man. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2010 4:50:00 PM
SOUP MAIL~A.S.A.P
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:19:00 AM
A nice pen picture of the baseball player. Good luck in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 7/31/2010 12:18:00 AM
poor guy! good poem
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