Laurie Ginn Poet Couplet

The Dilemma of Two Minds

The Dilemma of Two Minds
One Flesh, One Spirit

I’m tired, beaten down, worn
My allegiance is torn

I feel pain and sadness
No room for gladness

My thoughts are with the ever 
Insurmountable problem of lack
When I focus on that I succumb to 
His attack

And then I breathe

Give me one moment to find your peace
To know my torment you will ease

To take capture every thought
And know your word must be sought

On the power of the scriptures I will stand
With the realization that I battle no man

Satan seeks to see who he can destroy
But oh Father I will not let him capture my joy

My mind will be set on things above
And how to show your people love

Minds are not born again
So with the daily battle I must contend

If I do not control my thoughts
Satan will win

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Luke Steadman June 12, 2009 at 7:19 AM This is such a great poem laurie!...so well written and what a timeless struggle that we all must deal with...luke

Colin Mitchell Williams January 19, 2009 at 3:43 AM Ah ! The need to " Focus " .... here is an old saying quoted by a punk rocker in the 70's " if you're not part of the solution; then you're part of the problem " ... really liked the intent in this poem Laurie. Thank you so much for your comment on Torn and Tattered Wings

John Rhinem January 18, 2009 at 11:05 PM "Love & Blessings Always To You & All Of Those Whom You Love~ Forever, John!"~"Bye Precious Laurie Ginn!":)

John Rhinem January 18, 2009 at 11:01 PM Smile~I sincerely love writes like these dear lady~written amid faith & truth~and stright from the depths of heart & soul!!!~"Hello Precious & Blessed & Gifted Laurie Ginn!!!"~Smile~what an honestly sincere write you penned here~filled with "Inspiration, guidence & light!!!"~Yes, everyday is anew, and we must pick up our cross and sta near unto "Christ," our shelter and deliverer from life and fleshes storms and temptations!!?~"I Love Your Faith!!!"....{Cont}

Michaela Payne January 18, 2009 at 9:10 PM This was amazing, such strong words of faith. I loved this wonderful write, thanks for your kind words on my poem I appreciate it :) Blessings, ~Michaela~

Mary Duhart January 18, 2009 at 5:46 PM I know that's right. His job is to kill, steal, and destory. But thanks be to God that giveth us the victory.

Elaine George January 18, 2009 at 1:31 AM Wonderul faithful, spiritual rap, dear laurie. Love and peace, Lainie And thank you for your kind comments, they mean so much to me. Love and peace, Lainie

Tyesha Ehigiator January 17, 2009 at 9:23 PM Laurie, this was so beautiful and inspiring, it really touches my soul. I feel like I am battling Satan day in and day out, he is trying so hard to destroy all our lives and souls, but God came that we might have life and have it more abundantly. So we have to tell Satan to flee and give God all the praise. We have to lean on the lord for his strength and his mercy, he will set us free. I love this so much...Excellent poem *Love Tyesha

Frank F. Atanacio January 17, 2009 at 10:42 AM This is what I need to tone my writing down.. A Professional poet-- your words have arrived and I'm taking you to my leader I enjoyed this piece thanks for sharing

Derrick Burton January 17, 2009 at 10:14 AM Well written poetry which really lets out the pain building up from the heart and soul. enjoyed reading it and thank for your warm and honest comments. have a blessed day.

Carrie Richards January 17, 2009 at 8:38 AM I'm hearing a lot of feeling in the the poetry this morning. How wonderful that each one can share, and support, and to know one is not alone in the struggle. Well written, Laurie. ~ Love, Carrie

Robin L. Gass January 17, 2009 at 7:59 AM This is wonderful, Laurie! This touches my heart and hits very close to home for me. I know that God wants us to support each other and through this we gain strength and knowledge. You have a beautiful soul and a big loving heart! (AN e-mail will be coming soon!) Awesome write! Love, Robin

Debbie Guzzi January 17, 2009 at 7:18 AM The concept of positive focus bringing harmony to discord I totally agree! PS I put an adult warning on the verse Laurie LOL wash out you brain with my God's Voice ..smooch ...all things can not always be rosie or balance would not exsist! Light & LOve Debbie Guzzi

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson January 17, 2009 at 6:15 AM thanks for the comment on my poem rules-no it is not fiction it is true and in my writings these poems thur the years i have healed and hoping they will help others who have suffered the same abuse....this poem is great.....rhonda hero

Christopher Higgins January 17, 2009 at 6:07 AM Laurie I think we are some what on the same wave lenghts today with our poems. I love the a lot. Great insight to the soul of the voice in the piece. Awesome work!