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The Difference

A kitten with a delicate face
tiny,bright,and playful
formed a bond with my little granddaughter .
She blossomed into adulthood
becoming a fair mother
within a short period of months
but died in an accident.
I wondered and felt pain,
'What a stark difference between our lives !'
Her life was short,
and we have a long journey to go.
But in that brief moment 
of our shared life , our souls
connected beyond time's divide.
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Empress Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 11:53 PM
This is so heartfelt and poignant dear akham, its never easy losing a pet and yes their lives are so short, youve expressed so well here and written one that readers could feel so strongly. Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always
Singh Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 1:59 AM
Thank you
Duncan Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 2:15 AM
This is very nice
Singh Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 2:00 AM
Thanks so much
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Hello Aqkham, You should bve proud of yourself to give this kitten a home. We get attached to our pets when they are sick, of run over by a car, we miss them. Because they have become part of our family. Enjoy your weekend. /Darene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 8:59 AM
Hello Aqkham, You are very welcome. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Singh Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 2:01 AM
Thank you.
DiMino Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Wow! Deep and meaningful introspection. Maybe it is less about time, and more about sentiment? Eternal feelings. Like to think that, when I am at the Pearly Gate, there will be a couple of kittens rounding Peter's legs meowing, let him in -- he was good to us.
Singh Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 6:03 AM
Thanks for your nice comment.
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 7:51 PM
Oh I love this. So true and so profound. A fave.
Singh Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 8:24 PM
Than you.Wish you a happy New Year.
Romios Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 10:39 AM
Hi! I am almost 87 and I have had 20 or 25 caps in my lifetime. I can’t imagine life without a cat. They bring much peace and joy to you and they never hurt you. Only people are really good at that one. I think far more dangerous than a cat. Don’t believe me see what happened in New Orleans this week.!! I am facing this poem. It simply beautiful.. Pangie xx
Singh Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 7:57 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment Have a nice day
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