The Diet

My wife is on a diet, so am I,
her will prevails in setting what we do;
no more to breakfast on a tasty fry
nor lunch of prime Scotch mince or Irish stew.
She loves her cherry cake, but it’s now gone
and with it all the sweetmeats from the house;
the limits of what’s wholesome have been drawn,
I think that she mistakes me for a mouse.

If I could find the will or knew the way
to help provide new balance to her schemes,
although I sometimes think of what I’d say
there’s nothing I would do to end her dreams.

She doesn’t seem to count those chocolate snacks,
but I don’t care what label’s on her slacks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Cox Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Put in words so very nicely...
Logan Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 4:21 AM
Thanks. It may not be in your face but this is a love poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Another fun one.
Logan Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 10:06 PM
Yep, another I really enjoyed writing.
Turner Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Funny and sweet, Keith. I really loved it!
Logan Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Funny and Sweet, you described Anna perfectly.
Heemstra Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Good sonnet and thanks for advice on a song is born.
Logan Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 9:10 AM
a) Thank you, I enjoyed writing this. b) You're welcome.
Logan Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 8:35 AM
This never happened except in my imagination. Anna was always going to start her diet the following Monday. It is good to think back with a modicum of humour.
Logan Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 8:37 AM
No idea how this ended up here, it was a reply to Jan Allison.
James Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 11:54 PM
sweet!
Logan Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 8:39 AM
especially the chocolate snacks.
Allison Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 4:30 PM
I loved the sentiment of the poem and the final couplet reminds me of Billy Joel's I love you just the way you are:-) a delight of a poem Keith hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Thank you Jan, your approbation is always most welcome.
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