The Diet

My wife is on a diet, so am I,
her will prevails in setting what we do;
no more to breakfast on a tasty fry
nor lunch of prime Scotch mince or Irish stew.
She loves her cherry cake, but it’s now gone
and with it all the sweetmeats from the house;
the limits of what’s wholesome have been drawn,
I think that she mistakes me for a mouse.

If I could find the will or knew the way
to help provide new balance to her schemes,
although I sometimes think of what I’d say
there’s nothing I would do to end her dreams.

She doesn’t seem to count those chocolate snacks,
but I don’t care what label’s on her slacks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/2/2017 8:34:00 AM
Put in words so very nicely...
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Keith Logan
Date: 1/9/2017 4:21:00 AM
Thanks. It may not be in your face but this is a love poem.
Date: 11/8/2016 7:59:00 PM
Another fun one.
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Keith Logan
Date: 11/8/2016 10:06:00 PM
Yep, another I really enjoyed writing.
Date: 10/29/2016 7:53:00 AM
Funny and sweet, Keith. I really loved it!
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Keith Logan
Date: 10/29/2016 9:11:00 AM
Funny and Sweet, you described Anna perfectly.
Date: 10/28/2016 2:53:00 PM
Good sonnet and thanks for advice on a song is born.
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Keith Logan
Date: 10/29/2016 9:10:00 AM
a) Thank you, I enjoyed writing this. b) You're welcome.
Date: 10/28/2016 8:35:00 AM
This never happened except in my imagination. Anna was always going to start her diet the following Monday. It is good to think back with a modicum of humour.
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Keith Logan
Date: 10/28/2016 8:37:00 AM
No idea how this ended up here, it was a reply to Jan Allison.
Date: 10/27/2016 11:54:00 PM
sweet!
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Keith Logan
Date: 10/28/2016 8:39:00 AM
especially the chocolate snacks.
Date: 10/27/2016 4:30:00 PM
I loved the sentiment of the poem and the final couplet reminds me of Billy Joel's I love you just the way you are:-) a delight of a poem Keith hugs Jan xx
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Keith Logan
Date: 11/8/2016 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Jan, your approbation is always most welcome.
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