The Diaphanous Dance

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Written: June 26, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ In a world adorned with colors so bright, Where dreams and reality ignite, A tale unfolds that is enchanting and rare. Of a maiden draped in a diaphanous affair. Her skirt, a tapestry of bold, floral-printed art, Dancing with grace, right from the start. Diaphanous layers, floating with ease, Caressing her legs, as if to tease. Illuminated only by the fire glow, Her figure was shrouded, a secret to blow. In diaphanous clothes, she glides, A mystic presence where the magic resides. She drifts in a nimbus of copper light. Her ethereal beauty is a captivating sight. Silk charmeuse, with velvet trim, Creating a diaphanous effect, so whimsical and prim. The goddess, clad in a diaphanous robe, Stands tall, radiating power and probe. As medieval demoiselles gather to rule To admire their reflections in a mountain pool, But their own beauty pales in comparison, it's true. For the diaphanous dance of this enchanting maiden, Leaves them in awe, their hearts all but laden. Her movements are a delicate ballet to view. As she twirls and spins, her spirit is at play. Diaphanous fabric, such as a gentle breeze, sway. She caresses her skin as she moves with ease. Then, a few goodwills, he tried first to appease, Her presence, a symphony of grace and elegance, Leaving all who witness it in a trance. The Diaphanous Dance, a sight to behold, Where dreams and reality unfold.

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Date: 6/28/2023 6:00:00 PM
What an enchanting poem. Breathtaking imagery, and the rhyme is lilting. There cant possibly be a nicer or more eloquent way to describe someone as this. Pure magic my friend . Simply delectible.
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Date: 6/26/2023 12:12:00 PM
Nice penning with good imagery along with good rhyme and flow too. Have a nice day, blessings from Scotland,Gordon
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Date: 6/26/2023 10:44:00 AM
In a world adorned with colors so bright, Where dreams and reality ignite, A tale unfolds that is enchanting and rare--a superb start to your beauteous poem, my friend. Much enjoyed the revelry you convey throughout.
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