The Devils On the Wall

how come they can't see
feeding on his body
drinking of his blood
even thous who don't
still bath in his blood
and eat from his apple
i alone stand and fight
against the devil
sowed seed

like good little boy and girls
they eat his apple every day
all the knowledge one can understand
against the army of heaven and hell
i shall stand alone if need be
so my people 
can breath free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/4/2009 1:19:00 AM
On my verse Soul Flight..you write (i have to disagree with you. through chose come knowledge. if you have the knowledge before you acked. you learn nothing but the teachers right. you learn nothing gain no knowledge.) I see you reply to me here;) If you make a choice without "some" knowledge you are choicing blindly. Yes, any action will bring additional knowledge to the open mind, but you do have free will..and can chose to walk as often as possible in the Light.
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:56:00 PM
Brave words, John! You demonstrate amazing insight in this splendid verse. I especially love the last three lines. Quite inspirational! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2009 7:28:00 AM
with knowledge comes chioce. One doesn't have to make "dark" choices. Who are your people? (those/thous...I often flip these letters ;) Please consider writing me a verse for the dialect contest. Let them all hear the Canadian accent! Light & Love
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