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The

Devil's

Nightly

Quest

The Devil's Nightly Quest Ca

REVISED OCTOBER 16, 2019



New Jersey’s cloven-hoofed devil 
makes his way to the jetty
beneath the blanket of twinkling stars, anguish unabated 
his appetency growing stronger each day

her song rose like mist upon salty tide
creating an irresistible allure
perhaps a mermaid so fair
can be the auspicious boon he badly needs

he calls to her, certain she will listen again
as she has done so many nights before
his soul’s torment she has learned to alleviate
patiently, she clings to one boulder, waiting

for she alone can absolve him of past misdeeds
she motions for him to draw near
“Kiss me now,” she begs,
“Before anything more can go awry.”

he moves toward her, still in atrocious devil form
holding fast to the rocks as a storm approaches
perhaps this time their magical kiss 
will forever end his loneliness



October 14, 2019
For John Hamilton’s “Crazy A’s” Poetry Contest
The New Jersey Historical Society provided information about the New Jersey Devil and the mermaid he is said to connect with each night by the shore.
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Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 7:30 PM
wow, Carolyn, this is super creative. I bet it scored high because I can see it's a winner. Congrats. Very well deserved win.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Truly unique and captivating Carolyn; perhaps the idea that repentance is entirely separate or impossible for devils isn't evident in this piece; the gentleness of women oft mellows men and causes devils to see glimpses of God. Your poem is s reflecting on Oedipus and motherly-love as well. This lovely write is worthy of great praise;-) Fave my Lady
Chiri Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Carolyn congrats on a great placement loved the piece!;)
Adams Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 7:29 PM
i love the way you penned this tale... not surprised it's on the winner's list...congratulations on your win...hugs
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 6:38 PM
Thanks Carolyn for this interesting story you tell it well, congrats on a fine win!
One Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 1:40 PM
I really liked your story telling and choice of language...
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:01 AM
I think John will appreciate this one. Good luck in the contest. ;0) I enjoyed giving it a second read.
Ball Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 5:25 PM
WoW! I've heard of the New Jersey Devil but never that he connected with anything he didn't kill. Great story. God Bless, JB
Theraven Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Carolyn, Magnificent story.. well told. Absolution, divined through a kiss, to end torment of loneliness' clad in devil form. Brilliant. -Richard
Theraven Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Carolyn, That image of the grotesque with the map. The map calls to me. -Richard
Callus Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 1:14 PM
I had never heard of New Jersey’s devil, Carolyn, so your beautiful poetic narrative grabbed my attention even more. Will that kiss ever become reality, thus freeing him from whatever imprisoned him in such a monstrous form!? ~ Hugs // paul
Horne Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 8:12 AM
love this interesting write, my friend xx
Raven Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 4:53 AM
Hi Carolyn, your words draw in the reared to a most wonderful write. As always, your golden pen does shine and your words paint such real images on the canvas of the mind. Wishing you all the best in the contest. A fav. Have a wonderful Friday. Love and Hugs....Mike. XXXX
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 9:16 AM
One of the best I have read so far. Good luck in the contest.
May Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 5:42 AM
This was amazing Carolyn, good luck in the contest my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:22 AM
I love the old folklore stories that have been passed down over the years. Well written Carolyn and good luck. Tom
Devonshire Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 4:26 PM
Tom, the "devil" made his first appearance in the 1700s, before the Revolutionary War. He is said to be the 13th son of a Mrs. Leeds, who lived in the pine barrens and rejected her child at birth. Very interesting story about the devil's love for the mermaid. A fisherman in Long Beach had seen the devil singing to the mermaid. Thanks for reading...
Leffanta Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 5:57 PM
But Murphy's Law insists he will slip on the slimy rocks .....unless you write another verse! Aloha! Rico
Devonshire Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 4:27 PM
Ah, you should do a limerick on it, Rico!
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 4:36 PM
Definitely a unique theme Carolyn..had no idea about this famous devil from New Jersey..his nightly quest now about to be satiated in your story's happy ending..very clever write..all the best, Carolyn.
Green Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 3:21 PM
Wow Carolyn, that was so cool. Very well written and I love the theme, trying to save him from his loneliness. I am from South Jersey and very familiar with the Jersey devil. I have also been to the pine barrens but never viewed the creature like you have. Best wishes in the contest.
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