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The Devilish Chocolate Cake For Contest

The devilish chocolate cake entices me to devour I want to resist, the temptation just too much Teasing me with layers of heavenly chocolate, black, milk and white Texture reminiscent of the finest velvet Sending every sensory nerve into submission Its moist sponge is ready and waiting The twang of red berry jam compliments the sweetness Beads of sweat appear on my brow As I relish in the flavours so divine Pure indulgence aplenty, I savour every mouthful Cloaked in a creamy chocolate delight Each slice contains a billion calories or more I don't care, it was so worth it, no crumb left unturned And I sit back with a completely satisfied smile 25 September 2015

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Laura Hay

Date: 11/12/2015 3:33:00 PM

Well done! Warm regards, Laura.

Sarah Bryant
Date: 11/25/2015 9:44:00 AM

Thank you Laura :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/2/2015 4:18:00 PM

mmm delicious - congrats on your win:-0 hugs jan xx

Sarah Bryant
Date: 11/25/2015 9:44:00 AM

Thank you Jan :)

James Inman

Date: 11/1/2015 10:56:00 PM

Sarah, sounds like a variation on a Black Forest Cake. Lovely write, but I think the cake would put me in a chocolate coma.

Sarah Bryant
Date: 11/25/2015 9:45:00 AM

Thank you James, I love any cake, except orange flavoured but the chocolate cake is my favourite :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/1/2015 10:27:00 PM

Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Sarah!

Sarah Bryant
Date: 11/25/2015 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Dr Upma :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/1/2015 8:16:00 PM

Sarah, Imagery wise this one that separates you from the other, the use of the word devilish is very wise, as sweets are devils to us in a way: those who are in diet, with diabetes, to children and more!!! BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Sarah Bryant
Date: 11/25/2015 9:43:00 AM

Thank you Olive, I apologise for the late reply, I have been up to my neck in work! I always imagine a little red devil telling me to eat something I am trying not to, like the angel v devil scenario :) Thank you for placing me, I enjoyed writing it and it made me hungry :)