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The Devil You Say

I have often been bedeviled By it I have oft been disheveled Too many times have been frought With fears that have been wrought Only to leave me ~ Unlevelled!

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/22/2010 5:31:00 AM

You did a devilish job with this verse! ;) Thanks for all your sweet comments lately! Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 10/14/2010 6:54:00 PM

Hi, Daniel~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2010 10:32:00 PM

Good rhyming words, Daniel. Disheveled is quite a great word!! Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/11/2010 9:17:00 AM

Yes Dan its the only way to begin, live, and end each day is with the Word.. a cool write for the contest luv.. enjoyed and good luck ... my friend..

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/11/2010 8:27:00 AM

Way cool limerick, Daniel. Really like the way you used the rhyme! Funny too. Good luck in the contest. Diane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2010 8:16:00 AM

Thinking too much will make anyone "unleveled," Daniel. This is a great entry for the bedeviled contest. Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn