The Desolate Heart

Bitten by cold and stung by fright
A life beleaguered by the darkness of despair
The afflicted night awaits sunlight
                      Of hope, warmth, love and care

   The wet eyes await the horizon’s window
       To open for the majestic appearance of sun
Brightening lives with its transcendent glow
          And flogging the darkness to make it run

A frostbitten tree with its outstretched arms
     Stripped of its leaves, tormented and down
  Robbed of its beauty, devoid of its charms
        Prays for succour from sources unknown

The afflicted heart still beats in the chest
    With unabated passion for love and caress
In mounting anguish and growing unrest
        The undaunted spirit can’t settle for less

The desire, the hope, the expectations, the dream
To see the glowing face of light and love again
        A mirage they appear, an illusion they seem
    Tell the heart to contain the emotions insane

   One that has parted, one who has gone
     In the whirlwind of time will never return
Be your heart desolate, miserable, forlorn
         And your life slowly like a candle burn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/15/2012 1:00:00 AM
the poem resonates with desolation. So poetic!!! merry Christmas to YOU, my friend.
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Date: 3/20/2011 12:25:00 PM
Very good one about love loss and the empty feelings that come from the pain...Enjoyed reading this one this afternoon..Your kind review of my work was encouraging...Sara
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