The Desert Queen

She lays there stark naked
writhing and moaning on the hot sand
like a sensuous woman in heat,
Her golden tresses weave through the desert
as far north as the eyes can see,
waving like sheik's silken tent in the wind.

A little down south
hidden behind a billowing dune
lies an oasis for the blessed, 
like a shrine set in the sanctum sanctorum--
cool, moist and well-lined with palm trees
with a musky fragrance permeating the air,
And a wellspring of fresh, bubbly water
to quench the thirst of weary wayfarers.



~Abdul Malik
~"In the Desert"
~09/15/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Great choice for Best 2014 poem. Congratulations on your win.
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 10:01 PM
ABDUL, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
Trichet Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Awesome Abdul, I do remember this unique, sensuous poem...Congrats
Kendrick Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara
Yvonne Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on your win, an exceptional write!
Mehta Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Very awesome and interesting write, congratulations on the win, Abdul
Lawless Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Congratulations Abdul, this is one hot and sensual desert
Mandani Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 5:14 PM
I know! I was writhing and moaning while I was writing it!!
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 12:52 PM
many congrats again in Carol's contest:-) hugs jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 8:44 AM
A very interesting piece......Congrats for your win Abdul! :-)
Guzzi Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Nice use of personification. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mcintosh Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 7:18 AM
congratulations... Love and prayers, Gina
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 3:40 PM
many congratulations Abdul it is a beautifully penned poem and a worthy first place winner:-) Hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 12:14 PM
- A really wonderful winning poem - Congrats with the 1st place,Abdul ! - //Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 9:49 AM
This is a soothing write of a desert that offers an oasis to give reprieve.. Congrats on a great win!!
Yvonne Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on winning with this beautifully written poem.
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 1:56 AM
wow, that is one sensuous poem you got out of a desert theme.Congrats on your win!!
Trichet Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 8:33 PM
Excellent poem Abdul, loved the unique angle you approached this from! Congrats
Onclaud Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:28 PM
i never imagined a desert as lusty as this.. wonderful personification and unique take on the theme, abdul... proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
Mandani Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 3:56 PM
I knew you would like it. And I'm so glad that you did! Thanks a bunch.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 8:23 AM
I love this beautiful poem. You have wonderfully described the dessert. Congratulations on your big win Abdul.
Mandani Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Thanks for your generous comments.
Kayode Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 7:29 AM
Congrats on the win,Malik.
Nance Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 7:19 AM
It is hot in here, grats on your win :)
Mandani Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 10:38 AM
I know it's hot...but down south is an Oasis!!
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 5:22 AM
Dropping again to congratulate you on first placed win, ABDUL
Mandani Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Thanks a lot. I appreciate it.
Mehta Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Nice take on the desert theme, Abdul
Yaseen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 2:26 AM
Well done Abdul, Nice imagery and the depth of poem is exceptional.. Thumbs up
Mandani Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Thanks for your comments.
Vaso Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 7:38 PM
This is a poem of beauty and desire, well done, loved it!
Mandani Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks.
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