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The Desert Queen

She lays there stark naked writhing and moaning on the hot sand like a sensuous woman in heat, Her golden tresses weave through the desert as far north as the eyes can see, waving like sheik's silken tent in the wind. A little down south hidden behind a billowing dune lies an oasis for the blessed, like a shrine set in the sanctum sanctorum-- cool, moist and well-lined with palm trees with a musky fragrance permeating the air, And a wellspring of fresh, bubbly water to quench the thirst of weary wayfarers. ~Abdul Malik ~"In the Desert" ~09/15/2014

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Date: 12/29/2014 11:14:00 AM
Great choice for Best 2014 poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/26/2014 10:01:00 PM
ABDUL, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/19/2014 4:10:00 PM
Awesome Abdul, I do remember this unique, sensuous poem...Congrats
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Date: 12/19/2014 8:58:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/18/2014 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, an exceptional write!
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Date: 12/18/2014 1:30:00 AM
Very awesome and interesting write, congratulations on the win, Abdul
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations Abdul, this is one hot and sensual desert
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/17/2014 5:14:00 PM
I know! I was writhing and moaning while I was writing it!!
Date: 12/17/2014 12:52:00 PM
many congrats again in Carol's contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/24/2014 8:44:00 AM
A very interesting piece......Congrats for your win Abdul! :-)
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Date: 9/22/2014 3:42:00 PM
Nice use of personification. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/22/2014 7:18:00 AM
congratulations... Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/21/2014 3:40:00 PM
many congratulations Abdul it is a beautifully penned poem and a worthy first place winner:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:14:00 PM
- A really wonderful winning poem - Congrats with the 1st place,Abdul ! - //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 9:49:00 AM
This is a soothing write of a desert that offers an oasis to give reprieve.. Congrats on a great win!!
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Date: 9/21/2014 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this beautifully written poem.
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Date: 9/21/2014 1:56:00 AM
wow, that is one sensuous poem you got out of a desert theme.Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:33:00 PM
Excellent poem Abdul, loved the unique angle you approached this from! Congrats
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Date: 9/20/2014 2:28:00 PM
i never imagined a desert as lusty as this.. wonderful personification and unique take on the theme, abdul... proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/20/2014 3:56:00 PM
I knew you would like it. And I'm so glad that you did! Thanks a bunch.
Date: 9/20/2014 8:23:00 AM
I love this beautiful poem. You have wonderfully described the dessert. Congratulations on your big win Abdul.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/20/2014 10:40:00 AM
Thanks for your generous comments.
Date: 9/20/2014 7:29:00 AM
Congrats on the win,Malik.
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Date: 9/20/2014 7:19:00 AM
It is hot in here, grats on your win :)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/20/2014 10:38:00 AM
I know it's hot...but down south is an Oasis!!
Date: 9/20/2014 5:22:00 AM
Dropping again to congratulate you on first placed win, ABDUL
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/20/2014 10:38:00 AM
Thanks a lot. I appreciate it.
Date: 9/16/2014 10:03:00 AM
Nice take on the desert theme, Abdul
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Date: 9/16/2014 2:26:00 AM
Well done Abdul, Nice imagery and the depth of poem is exceptional.. Thumbs up
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/16/2014 9:55:00 AM
Thanks for your comments.
Date: 9/15/2014 7:38:00 PM
This is a poem of beauty and desire, well done, loved it!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/16/2014 9:55:00 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks.

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