Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- the Demon Speaks -

You found my words
                                 - and you devoured them 

                                     The jungle is thirsty
                                   and you must satisfy it

                                       The infinity of love,
                                  a strong and deep feeling
                                           I'm numb
                                    Within short minutes
                                  you change personality
                                 - created by the monster
                                         A black raven
                                       ... steals in vain

                               Kissed by the lips of contempt
                                       Crimes and shame,
                                      burning in your veins
                                       -  facing the wall
                                           - emptiness
                                       'No pain, no gain'






28/11/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Sunlite Wanter December 26, 2019 at 10:21 AM I am shivering! A chilling poem for the day after Christmas! Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:06 AM - Many thanks Sunlite, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phil Capitano December 9, 2019 at 9:01 AM Your pen is spilling dark thoughts onto the white fabric of my soul. Good write. Your avatar/photo made me smile, he's a dead-ringer for my own grandson. :) Have a happy holidays. Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2019 at 12:25 PM - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Phil :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Caren Krutsinger December 5, 2019 at 5:16 AM Your imagery is wonderfully dark. Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2019 at 1:57 PM - Caren, thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Ann Foster December 1, 2019 at 1:19 PM Wow... very powerful write. I love it... Ann Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2019 at 1:40 PM - Glad you liked it Ann, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina November 30, 2019 at 8:08 PM A powerful and deep write Anne-Lise. Great write...Thanks also for stopping by. Have a great night! Hugs // Charlie :))) Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2019 at 8:36 AM - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Sandra Adams November 29, 2019 at 7:13 PM dark powerful write falls from your pen, this is well crafted and leaves an impact, well done my friend... hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 1:55 PM - Glad you liked it, thank you very much Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish November 29, 2019 at 7:06 PM Mysterious verse here. My nephews set a poem of mine to music called "Demon Demon" by Ghost Funk Orchestra. Google it in! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 1:57 PM - I want to check it, Matthew :) - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Tom Cunningham November 29, 2019 at 10:17 AM Quite a dark verse Anne, well composed. Hope you have a great weekend. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 1:55 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your lovely comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless November 29, 2019 at 7:34 AM Poe warned of the dangers of quoting the raven.....a cold dark corner painted here Anna Lise Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 1:56 PM - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2019 at 7:21 AM A dark one well expressed. Hugs Rick. Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 1:54 PM - Glad you liked it, thank you very much Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper November 29, 2019 at 12:37 AM Strong emotions felt, good write.. hugs eve Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 1:54 PM - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2019 at 6:34 PM the darkness always comes when the demon speaks excellent pen dear anne lise i pray your weekend is blessed Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 1:53 PM - Thank you very much Liam, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Jennifer Proxenos November 28, 2019 at 1:02 PM I really enjoyed this write - a deep poem filled with raven warning - the demon works in so many curious dangerous ways. A truly talented poem. Hugs and blessings Anne-Lise, Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 1:53 PM - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Quoth Theraven November 28, 2019 at 12:37 PM Anne-Lise, I love this for the Raven's contempt and the bi-polar warning. Hope your Thanksgiving features a lighter bird. -Richard Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 1:53 PM - Thank you very much Richard, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Vijay Pandit November 28, 2019 at 10:28 AM I felt the intensity of your poem, Anne-Lise--the demon is dark. Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2019 at 11:56 AM - Thank you very much Vijay, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 28, 2019 at 9:25 AM This is dark! Tingles in the veins. Well done! xomo Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2019 at 11:55 AM - Glad you liked it, thank you very much Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)