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The Demon

I've been to the top of the mountain I've surveyed the valley below. I've heard the mountaintop call me, I've felt the icy wind blow. I came down from the mountain Feeling exalted and free. It's when I got to the bottom; That's when my demon grabbed me. He said, "One drink surely won't hurt, Let's hit a strip club or two-- We'll get sloshed, then we'll find some drugs You know, like we always do." I lost that euphoric feeling The mountain had given to me, So I took a seat with my demon And drank--that's my insanity. "This still isn's low enough," He whispered in my ear. "Let's dig us a hole in the ground." He handed me one more beer. I started drinking and digging Scratched up, dirty and sore. I hit a rock and thought I was done But my demon wanted more. His seductive manner altered, He started lashing out at me. He said, "I own you; body, mind and soul. I shall never let you be free." I wiped away the dirty sweat; Wearily, I chipped the stone. My demon handed me a drink And made me dig alone. I dug my hole for many years I forgot the mountain air. My demon laughed while I cried, He clearly didn't care. "I've had enough!" I screamed one day. My demon turned in shock. I stared at him through bloodshot eyes. "I can't dig through one more rock." I kicked him down; began my climb Back out of my abyss I heard the demon howl in rage, And then I heard him hiss. I scratched, I clawed, I cried and prayed Never once did I look down. Every time the demon tried to speak, I swiftly kicked him down. The hole is well behind me now I've started on mhy climb, I'm going to the mountaintop, If only one more time. D H Loewen

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Date: 5/1/2018 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful. We all have our personal demons to fight. And they know just when to grab us only to drag us back to the dark pit. But we should not give up. Stay vigilant and wary. Even when you fall, stand up again. I loved this. (I"ve used a similar theme in my poems "Stillness" and "Mindful". Check them out if you'd like). Thank you.
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David Loewen
Date: 5/1/2018 10:11:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy. I'm 5 years and 4 months sober, now, but you'll find a similar theme in much of my poetry. I'll check out your poems forthwith.

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