The Delayed Flight Home

Upon revelation’s flight
Under Orion’s focus

I witness a fiery glow towards familiar horizons.

‘Tis no sunrise

It is a striking reality.

My saddened retinas witness monochromatic pitchforks,
Desolated screams,
Embellished declarations from misguided leaders
And self-made stallions riding into condescending sunsets
Without any earned punctuation to be taken seriously

A House of Eroded Representatives

A village of One
A village of souls
Pushing
Back

…

There was a home upon these well-worn landing strips.

This was my home.

But, these forged rooftops now taste
Withering, hurricane gusts of red velvet cake’s mold

Rusted nails forcibly detached from honored foundations
Unto egotistical coffins

The reality
Shining through meter-less corruptions
Comes full circle

Small doses of poisonous vendettas
Fed from tarnished, silver spoons

Echoes of Cuban Fidel
Lace elasticity of “open arms”
With onyx, unfiltered coffee drops
Coating infant’s petulant lip

Witnessing cotton-less sheep walking with listless fervor 
Towards silenced, condemned “Noahs”

I signal pilot within my melancholic wisdoms
To redirect our flight
To a new horizon

To an unsheltered domain
Where even waterfalls still allow
Conducive verbiage to rise
Amongst the unabashedly meek

To a destination
Where stature is defined by all
Not by one

Where character
Is developed under accountabilities’ pen

Where high horses & curtained theatrics
Are the only victims of banned tomorrows

Where honor
Is still defined
Without deleted, impulsive banter

Where friendship,
Love,
Wisdom,
Memories,
Shine

…

Because
Things

Things are no longer the same
Things are no longer the same

Things are no longer the same.

©Drake J. Eszes
“And my ties are severed clean. The less I have, the more I gain. Off the beaten path, I reign.” –Wherever I may Roam by Metallica (my lifelong song)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/16/2015 7:49:00 AM
printed.....goes to my inspiration hallway @ home!
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Date: 1/15/2015 9:20:00 PM
you describe a very hard journey well put it bring very sacred memories into my heart thanks Drake
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Date: 4/5/2014 2:47:00 AM
Drake; You have written a fantastic poem. Everything fits perfect. Thanks for sharing. I agree, things are no longer the same... Lucilla
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Date: 4/5/2014 7:29:00 AM
Yeah, they aren't. It's obvious based on what we're still witnessing today...pitiful. Thank you so much, Lucilla. :)
Date: 1/23/2014 9:28:00 PM
Okay...now you went and did it! How can I choose a favorite line? When so many blow me away? I see metaphors for all injustice we endure....segue to all the beauty we hope for! Truly a work of art! Drake!....okay..."where high horses and curtained theatrics are the only victims of banned tomorrows" wheww!!!! Heavy perfection! Jimbo
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Date: 1/15/2015 9:20:00 PM
I agree it's trtuely moving
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Date: 1/23/2014 10:09:00 PM
Damn, you just FLOOR me! Why are you so damn awesome, Jimbo!!!! What a tremendous comment! Thank you so much!
Date: 1/15/2014 5:28:00 PM
I love how you added those lyrics from Metallica at the end. I am reflecting a lot in this fantastic piece. I love your source of inspiration and where your mind takes you with these words. I admire the ostensible spontaneity of your work, yet it clicks and weaves together very effectively. Another great one. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/15/2014 5:40:00 PM
I believe the lyrics were a necessary addition to the overall message of this writing. The song truly is a life symbol to how I do things in my daily life, how I treat others, and how I should be treated. You rock, Laura. I discovered that fact on Google in the search results. ;-)
Date: 1/11/2014 8:17:00 AM
Thanks for your visit yesterday, I hope all is well in the land of Drake.
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Date: 1/11/2014 8:22:00 AM
My pleasure. Yes sir, all is well. =D
Date: 1/11/2014 5:45:00 AM
Ah, man...I fear I'm too weary eyed to give this a proper comment...however, it was just the shot of brilliance I needed this morning. And a Metallica quote to top it off! -BROFIST-
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Date: 1/11/2014 6:51:00 AM
Awesome! Anything w/Metallica is an absolute good. =D -BROFIST- You rock, my good man!!
Date: 1/10/2014 3:55:00 AM
An awesome piece Drake! We all like things to be predictable don't we? We expect things to keep on just the way they always have. But maybe it's just a trick we play on ourselves, our way of making life seem ordinary. Truth is, life is so extraordinary we find ourselves sighing just to take it all in. Nothing is ever certain or remains the same. But most of us don't find out until the ground disappears from beneath our feet. We are a compilation of all we have ever lived. That remains my friend.
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Date: 1/10/2014 10:16:00 AM
Well, for me personally, I don't like predictability. But, there are some things in life I do expect to just go right. Especially with the people one comes across during certain stages of life. Well said & thank you so much, Sarai.
Date: 1/9/2014 7:15:00 PM
a fitting song quote to go with it. This exudes feeling, Drake!! We just can't ever go back! also this seems very political to me. Well, I guess because I am feeling lost in my own country!
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Date: 1/10/2014 10:14:00 AM
Hi, Andrea. Yes, for sure. Political is just the tip of the whole message here. But, you are on the right track nonetheless. Thank you so much for stopping by! :)
Date: 1/9/2014 9:32:00 AM
As usual, your words weave a tapestry that makes the readers stand in awe like patrons at an art gallery, with everyone experiencing something different in the images. When we take the trip and go home again, we find it is never quite like we remembered. We have changed and don't quite fit into our slots anymore. Somewhere along the trip back to our present we realize that home is truly inside in our hearts and our memories, and we take it with us wherever we go.
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Date: 1/9/2014 10:24:00 AM
Floored. I am just floored with your words. No way could I have put this better than you did. Home really is inside of our hearts...thank you so much, Monterey!
Date: 1/8/2014 2:55:00 PM
There you go again bending my mind, Fortunately my mind is somewhat elastic. I find depending on my mood I always get something different from your work. I don't think ties are ever truly cut clean.
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Date: 1/9/2014 10:23:00 AM
Truly stated well, Richard. I might have to agree that some ties really aren't ever clearly cut. Many thanks my good man!
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:59:00 PM
Going back to former familiar places is a rather sad endeavour because we know we can never truly return because we are not the same person who was previously there. It is almost like viewing old photographs and wondering how we were ever so innocent.
Date: 1/7/2014 7:25:00 PM
Well..hello Drake....man.. like everyone else...I'm blown away by the way you stop us in our tracks and just say wow this guy is good! Every time...love the not so subtle...subtle message of this one...:-)
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Date: 1/8/2014 1:50:00 PM
Hey Donna! =D I like, really like, how you put that. Thank you so much! =D
Date: 1/7/2014 9:01:00 AM
drake!.. happy new year!.. the wailing reality of a home gone cuts like a knife.. how beautifully sullen to find a place of comfort turning into something beaten by sordid elements.. great symbolisms of a return to ' nowhere' .. love mettalica---deep, angry, soulful like the core of your piece..hope you are good! !.. huggs
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Date: 1/7/2014 4:07:00 PM
Spot on, darling. SPOT ON! I never pictured you loving Metallica. You've earned Bonus Drake Points (BDP) with me. ;-) Though, I won't say "angry" so much as just sheer frustration & disappointment. Many thanks to you, Netter! =D
Date: 1/7/2014 4:48:00 AM
WOW, THAT WAS PLEASANT READING... very deep i admire your work always, 2 thumbs up for Metallica!!!
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Date: 1/7/2014 4:05:00 PM
Hey Denise! This is a pleasant surprise! It's great to see you around again. Thank you so very much! I definitely appreciate it. =D
Date: 1/6/2014 8:32:00 PM
The thing I find most intriguing about this piece is not within the poem itself (but the poem is totally awesome), but rather the ending quote...I love Metallica, I know that might be a surprise but I do, and I remember this line within the song, so very relevant to life too!! Your poem here is perfect in every dimension that it reveals itself within! I really enjoyed reading this powerful write here my friend, so very awesome! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/6/2014 10:12:00 PM
You love Metallica too? Yeah, color me surprised. lol =) Thank you so very much, Russell!
Date: 1/6/2014 6:33:00 PM
I'm not about to claim that I understand your poem, but the truth is I don't care if I do. As I've said to you before, your way with words is breathtaking. Kurt Schwitters in words... Jack http://artchive.com/artchive/S/schwitters.html http://images.search.yahoo.com/search/images;_ylt=A0SO8zn1SctSrnkAixlXNyoA;_ylu=X3oDMTB0YmEwaDF1BHNlYwNzYwRjb2xvA2dxMQR2dGlkA1ZJUDM0NV8x?_adv_prop=image&fr=ytff1-yff25&va=kurt+schwitters+merz
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Date: 1/6/2014 10:12:00 PM
That's ok, Jack. Your honestly is deeply appreciated. I don't expect everybody to get everything I say. But, you still come by and leave your kind thoughts. That means more to me...
Date: 1/6/2014 1:01:00 PM
- I just read M.R. "interpretation" of your poem - beautiful and touching ... however, "things are no longer the same" - Proficient in both versions. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/6/2014 10:09:00 PM
Yes, Vie definitely did a wonderful job on her end...still very surprised by it all. Thank you so much, Anne Lise!
Date: 1/6/2014 12:10:00 PM
Where friendship, Love, Wisdom, Memories, Shine.............I want the flight redirected there to....Insist on it, my dear. :) What a strong powerful write. I'm with Charmaine....it's so good to have you "back". I've missed you!
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Date: 1/6/2014 10:09:00 PM
Hell yeah, right?! =D You've been missed too, Eileen. Thank you so much!
Date: 1/6/2014 10:27:00 AM
So sad this is Drake..especially the ending.but so happy I am to see you here.A breath of fresh air to the site.
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Date: 1/6/2014 10:08:00 PM
For sure, Charmaine. Thank you so much for that. :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/6/2014 10:28:00 AM
Happy new year Drake
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