Constance La France Poet Kimo

The Deep Blue Sea

  I float    on sea waves of     tranquility
drift   far down to find stillness -
                      feel     the serenity


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January 13, 2016

Poetry/Kimo/the deep blue sea
Copyright Protected, ID 16-744-369-0
all Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, Only Those NA Contests with note
sponsor, Edward Ebbs (NA in Theme #6 Contest, Skat)

Second Place

Note:
I love the dreamy quality of this poem.  It makes me want to float, light and
relaxed, beautiful in tranquility and serenity, I think it is an excellent Kimo.
The poem captures the feeling of floating in the deep blue.

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Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 6:25 PM Thanks

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 11:47 PM I imagine you will. I love your poetry Constance La France February 7, 2016 at 5:16 PM Smiling !!!

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 8:45 PM Thank you for the reply. In which reminds me, I have 3 contest to close. Skat's and my own. Geez, where is my sister when I need her? It's going to be a long night. Have a good one. LINDA Constance La France February 6, 2016 at 11:35 PM Best of luck with your judging, and hopefully I see my name on those winning lists !!!

Poet Destroyer A February 3, 2016 at 11:35 PM I kind of remember this one, sometimes I don't place with bottom notes. It's kind fo distracting. It is a good poem, just so you know. LINDA (regarding the reply) Constance La France February 4, 2016 at 8:25 AM Linda, I will remember that for your future contests but thanks for the inspiration and as you see it got 2nd place with Edward so all is good in my soul ~

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 10:22 PM Broken, Congrats on your win in "Edward Ebbs" contest. LINDA - Constance La France February 1, 2016 at 1:37 AM Linda, thanks for the congrats, this is one that was na in a Skat/PD contest, about the sea ?

Hansteven Selfa January 28, 2016 at 8:47 AM Congratulations! You deserve the win! I can't believe this one had received an NA before. Constance La France January 28, 2016 at 11:17 AM Hans, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment !!

Beautiful Scars January 25, 2016 at 7:39 AM Congrats on your placement in the contest Broken Wings...You deserve it :) *smiles* -luloo Constance La France January 25, 2016 at 8:36 AM Laura, thanks so much for the congrats and the compliment and the smiles !

Skat A January 24, 2016 at 10:10 PM Broken, Congrats on your awesome, win. Luv **SKAT** Constance La France January 25, 2016 at 3:17 AM thanks

Edward Ebbs January 24, 2016 at 8:59 PM Nicely done Broken, congrats on your second place in this almost no rules contest. Thank you for entering and congrats :) Constance La France January 25, 2016 at 3:18 AM Edward, thanks for the great contest and for giving my poem a second chance, and a second place, I am honored and thrilled ~

White Sage January 14, 2016 at 10:20 AM well written poem and a superb form...you wrote it excellently BW Constance La France January 14, 2016 at 10:46 AM Sage, oh I do love the word superb and thanks for the excellently !