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The Deep Blue Sea

I float on sea waves of tranquility drift far down to find stillness - feel the serenity ____________________ January 13, 2016 Poetry/Kimo/the deep blue sea Copyright Protected, ID 16-744-369-0 all Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Only Those NA Contests with note sponsor, Edward Ebbs (NA in Theme #6 Contest, Skat) Second Place Note: I love the dreamy quality of this poem. It makes me want to float, light and relaxed, beautiful in tranquility and serenity, I think it is an excellent Kimo. The poem captures the feeling of floating in the deep blue.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 6:25:00 PM

Thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 11:47:00 PM

I imagine you will. I love your poetry

Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2016 5:16:00 PM

Smiling !!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 8:45:00 PM

Thank you for the reply. In which reminds me, I have 3 contest to close. Skat's and my own. Geez, where is my sister when I need her? It's going to be a long night. Have a good one. LINDA

Constance La France
Date: 2/6/2016 11:35:00 PM

Best of luck with your judging, and hopefully I see my name on those winning lists !!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2016 11:35:00 PM

I kind of remember this one, sometimes I don't place with bottom notes. It's kind fo distracting. It is a good poem, just so you know. LINDA (regarding the reply)

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2016 8:25:00 AM

Linda, I will remember that for your future contests but thanks for the inspiration and as you see it got 2nd place with Edward so all is good in my soul ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2016 10:22:00 PM

Broken, Congrats on your win in "Edward Ebbs" contest. LINDA -

Constance La France
Date: 2/1/2016 1:37:00 AM

Linda, thanks for the congrats, this is one that was na in a Skat/PD contest, about the sea ?