The Deep

Deep deep In the night Deep Deep In the oceans depth It is I who slept It is I who wept Who I pray shall waken me From the deep of this darkest of nights Who shall take the sails of chance The winds may blow others ashore Deep deep in your heart Would you ever ever Weep for me? Deep deeper Touch me deep I am yours to keep Deep deep in loves embrace I lay before you in eternal sleep Deep deep is my loving kiss Never lets the winds amiss Of loves great bounds Victories bold Deep deep is the kiss that never unfolds I lay in death For you to hold Deep deep our love untold

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Julia Ward

Date: 2/27/2015 2:03:00 PM

Congrats. on your unique presentation and thoughts. Hugs, Julia

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/27/2015 10:25:00 PM

Thank you so much Julia!!!!

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 10/26/2014 5:36:00 PM

Very deep and romantic write and I love how you displayed it...very creative arthur :) Ana

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 7:30:00 PM

Thanks Ana!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/15/2014 5:05:00 PM

A love untold, and a secret taken to the grave.... These words are very powerful, Arthur. They really captivated me and made me feel a deep sadness.... Very beautifully expressed, Arthur!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 7:30:00 PM

Thank you Kelly!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/15/2014 2:12:00 PM

a touching pen Arthur heart rending cry love it and ty for your very kind comment hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 7:29:00 PM

Tiss I who tips my hat to you, :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/14/2014 5:29:00 PM

deeply touching beautifully penned piece arthur god bless

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 7:29:00 PM

Thank you liam

Paul Callus

Date: 10/14/2014 12:55:00 PM

This is a beautiful write, Arthur...not light, but deep and touching poetry. I too have ben captivated by the final lines. a top rating for this one. // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 7:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul, much appreciated

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/14/2014 4:31:00 AM

Very deep like challenger deep of sea!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 7:28:00 PM

Thank you kindly Sir!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/14/2014 1:51:00 AM

This is....deep in meaning...deeper yet in beauty. I LOVE IT! :) Seriously...those last lines are just so beautiful, Arthur. My dear, I did not receive your email. Please resent.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 7:27:00 PM

Thank so much, and now if I could only remember what my email was supposed to be about!