Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

The Deep

Deep deep
In the night
Deep Deep
In the oceans depth
It is I who slept
It is I who wept
Who I pray shall waken me
From the deep of this darkest of nights
Who shall take the sails of chance
The winds may blow others ashore
Deep deep in your heart
Would you ever ever
Weep for me?










Deep deeper








Touch me deep
I am yours to keep
Deep deep in loves embrace
I lay before you in eternal sleep
Deep deep is my loving kiss
Never lets the winds amiss
Of loves great bounds
Victories bold
Deep deep is the kiss that never unfolds
I lay in death
For you to hold
Deep deep our love untold

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Julia Ward February 27, 2015 at 2:03 PM Congrats. on your unique presentation and thoughts. Hugs, Julia Arthur Vaso February 27, 2015 at 10:25 PM Thank you so much Julia!!!!

Ana Espinola Collins October 26, 2014 at 5:36 PM Very deep and romantic write and I love how you displayed it...very creative arthur :) Ana Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 7:30 PM Thanks Ana!

Kelly Deschler October 15, 2014 at 5:05 PM A love untold, and a secret taken to the grave.... These words are very powerful, Arthur. They really captivated me and made me feel a deep sadness.... Very beautifully expressed, Arthur! Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 7:30 PM Thank you Kelly!

Shadow Hamilton October 15, 2014 at 2:12 PM a touching pen Arthur heart rending cry love it and ty for your very kind comment hugs Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 7:29 PM Tiss I who tips my hat to you, :)

Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2014 at 5:29 PM deeply touching beautifully penned piece arthur god bless Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 7:29 PM Thank you liam

Paul Callus October 14, 2014 at 12:55 PM This is a beautiful write, Arthur...not light, but deep and touching poetry. I too have ben captivated by the final lines. a top rating for this one. // paul Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 7:28 PM Thank you so much Paul, much appreciated

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen October 14, 2014 at 4:31 AM Very deep like challenger deep of sea! Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 7:28 PM Thank you kindly Sir!

Eileen Manassian October 14, 2014 at 1:51 AM This is....deep in meaning...deeper yet in beauty. I LOVE IT! :) Seriously...those last lines are just so beautiful, Arthur. My dear, I did not receive your email. Please resent. Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 7:27 PM Thank so much, and now if I could only remember what my email was supposed to be about!