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The Death of Merat

I leave the auction sick, my mettle frayed
A ghost, I fear, in oil clutched near my side
No doubt, a ghost for which I've dearly paid!
How best to next proceed, I must decide

The painting I have bought portrays a man
laid out upon a bed as if he sleeps
A woman stands beside the low divan
Offhand, I'd guess a mistress that he keeps

I recognize the bloke who's laying prone
A classless dog and local alley cat
His past and family folk remain unknown
but those with whom he spoke called him "Merat"

I peer more closely at the racy scene;
Beside Merat, a pool of crimson red
The woman's face is cool, if not serene,
quite out of place, considering the bed!

I take my time in staring at the girl,
and make an observation I can't bear
my hands begin to shake, the air to swirl,
for that's my naked wife who's painted there!

As I trudge home, it's hell that fills my head
and passing by a doorsill with a bin,
I tell myself it's I who will be dead
if I don't shove the dreadful painting in

My mind is blank as I bypass the stairs
and free from fear of my assassin wife,
I steer my thoughts past murder and affairs,
then pull her near and thank her for my life

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Date: 7/26/2023 8:35:00 PM
Excellent poem as an interpretation of the painting. Very creative poetry, Lycia. Congratulations on the Top 100 New Poems List! Bill
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/26/2023 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Bill. xoxo LyLy
Date: 7/22/2023 7:13:00 AM
Well, look who's still around. Quite a write here Lycia
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/26/2023 9:34:00 PM
Buggz.
Date: 7/14/2023 6:39:00 PM
The last stanza is really interesting. Has a catharsis effect. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/14/2023 11:54:00 PM
Thank you, Chris! xoxo LyLy
Date: 7/14/2023 3:07:00 PM
Lycia, what an interesting turn of events! Ditch the painting, keep your wife, save your life. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your placement in Dilly Dally’s contest.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/14/2023 11:54:00 PM
Thank you, Mark! xoxo LyLy
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