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The Death of Innocence

Raised by wormy flesh from the ravages of war Broken years of struggle rose from ashes seeking justice Singers sung in joyous tones Artists guiding frustrated youth to find new worlds, new cultures, where none had heard or gone before Wanting freedom from bridled thinking, tethered to the past Expressing their joy in happy communion that died when three troubadours crashed and burned 7/28/17 Contest...Iconic Songs American Pie-Don Mclean post script...To leave the future a dark chaotic place filled with angry voices lashing out with years of counter-culture soaked in questions of what could have been now saturated with resentment for the death of innocence that cried out on a cold Winter night

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Date: 9/4/2017 8:47:00 AM
Very deep my friend, I liked your take on the contest.. congratulations on your placement..
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/4/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thank you for the kindness Silent One
Date: 7/30/2017 9:07:00 PM
ooohhh, I love how you tied the trinity together at the end. I am probably putting them at the front when I do mine on this beloved song as well. And oh my, that post script!! so sad.
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Date: 7/30/2017 9:06:00 PM
sorry about your son, Frederic, that must be hard. Now I will read your poem
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Date: 7/28/2017 5:05:00 PM
Great free verse, Frederic! I wish you good luck! :)
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