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The Death of Innocence

Raised by wormy flesh from the ravages of war
Broken years of struggle rose from ashes
seeking justice
Singers sung in joyous tones
Artists guiding frustrated youth 
to find new worlds, new cultures, 
where none had heard or gone before
Wanting freedom from bridled thinking, tethered to the past
Expressing their joy in happy communion
that died when three troubadours crashed and burned


7/28/17 Contest...Iconic Songs
American Pie-Don Mclean



post script...To leave the future a dark chaotic place
                   filled with angry voices lashing out
                   with years of counter-culture soaked
                   in questions of what could have been
                   now saturated with resentment
                   for the death of innocence
                   that cried out on a cold Winter night

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Date: 9/4/2017 8:47:00 AM
Very deep my friend, I liked your take on the contest.. congratulations on your placement..
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/4/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thank you for the kindness Silent One
Date: 7/30/2017 9:07:00 PM
ooohhh, I love how you tied the trinity together at the end. I am probably putting them at the front when I do mine on this beloved song as well. And oh my, that post script!! so sad.
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Date: 7/30/2017 9:06:00 PM
sorry about your son, Frederic, that must be hard. Now I will read your poem
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Date: 7/28/2017 5:05:00 PM
Great free verse, Frederic! I wish you good luck! :)
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