The Dead Word Pile

The Dead Word Pile

My fault, sorry, the writing’s on the wall.
Awesome, pretty, don’t matter none at all.
The words just have to join the pile
Where all dead words will go.
Their time is up, it’s over, done
No longer in the flow.

Jiffy, knickers, no silver linings here.
Awesome, very, I’ll cry them in my beer.
Selfie, twerk, will move to take their place.
And words like cool, too long in use,
 Will not keep up the pace.

Perhaps if I could hum them and set them to a beat.
I’d roll down all my windows and blast them to the street.
I’d use them one more time and mix them in a rant
I’d use them all together to give them a new slant.
I’d bounce them off the Dairy Queen, the Laundromat, the Mall
I’d shout them out just one more time 
And try to save them all.

But really now, their time is up
It’s too late for the save.
I give them up, forevermore
And cast them to their grave.

Whoops!
OMG
Another one bites the dust.
Down the drain!
MY BAD.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/7/2016 8:56:00 AM
Congrats Richard, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 9/9/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thanks Teddy. I appreciate the encouragement. I left a comment on "Tanka II". I love the way that worked.
Date: 9/2/2016 8:22:00 PM
Richard, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/9/2016 9:43:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and comment. After reading your poems I am encouraged to try a Senryu-you do such a wonderful job with so few words!
Date: 5/30/2015 2:26:00 AM
Very nice in deed ;)
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Date: 5/7/2015 9:38:00 PM
Solid 7 for the creative and fine write... Dead words, dead heads, its all so damn groovy until somebody wets the bed. "Ain't that the truth" A7....
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Date: 5/3/2015 7:31:00 AM
Dude, This rocks, way cool and I do get it. As a child of the 70's we had our terms. Groovy was dead, cool was hot, etc. etc. As an adult we're left with foul language for emphasis. Good shot my friend. I really like Rhyme. Tom Smith
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