The Dead Pitter Patter

days spent, the pitter patter of my heart beating faster.
Our love, my love, i thought it was real.
Urs was just fake.
Everytime you came on, it beat and flip flopped.
But now you tell me, you've asked your ex back out.
My pitter pattering heart died out.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 26, 2009 at 8:25 AM
Lovely poem Tiffany>>James
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July 23, 2009 at 7:23 PM
Tiffany, Don't grieve for him. Obviously he is not worthy of you. And though it may not seem so, the pain will go and your heart will pitter patter again. I promise. Love, Will
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