The Daydream

To lie in grass while warm breeze blows

Just aware of a sunlit sky

Slumber lightly, slowly, slightly

A half dream serenades the mind

To lie at peace, weightless and warm

Barely know the clear blue sky

Senses dim, then fade then gone

To wake anew, refreshed, reborn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vincent Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 1:47 PM
I just had to share this my dear.....the least I could do with it
Bohto Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 1:51 PM
OMG. Earthy. Organic. Created from our earth. Lying in the womb from where we came from. Loved this write. I do this all the time. Obviously you do too.
Vincent Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 12:50 AM
To lie at peace, weightless and warm...........I love the imagery in this great piece.. A #7 for me.
Arnone Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 11:41 PM
A light and weightless gem of a daydream. :-)
Duet Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 9:53 PM
How lovely a daydreaming day it was! So simple, so beautiful.
Smith Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Thanks Carole, sometimes I like to melt away, and take others with me. Glad you liked it. Tom
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 4:55 PM
lovely imagery - this sounds like my idea of heaven:-)Hugs Jan xxx
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