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The Daydream

There you are In the middle of the sky In your peach cropped up gown Swaying to the direction of the evening breeze Your dark hair laid still on your shoulders Like she was kissing you at the back of your neck The stars became jealous of you They came down from their homes Just to see this radiant beauty Birds hovered above your head As the clouds steeped low While you walked to me between aisles of lightnings Lost in the glaring sight of you And in the glory of my head A friend punched me in the nuts And in a blink You got lost with everything And left me with the reality before my very eyes That it was just one of my daydreams...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/21/2018 6:22:00 AM
I was totally lost in your poem thinking how beautiful it was Arum then you hit me with the punchline and shattered my illusions lol.
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Date: 7/21/2018 9:54:00 AM
Hehehe... Oooh! Thanks for reading my poem.
Date: 7/21/2018 2:55:00 AM
LOL Arum Dusu This is Very funny ! Well done and thanks for making me happy :D
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Date: 7/21/2018 2:59:00 AM
Hehehe... My pleasure. Appreciate your comments, Paris-Maree

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