The Day Yawns, Stretches

The day yawns
stretches...
like a flower
petals upturned
ghostlike vapors
drift away
Bullfrogs croak
My dog slumbers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Buehler Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 10:50 PM
When I think of days yawning, I think of summer. Your poem evokes pleasant thoughts and peaceful feelings. :=)
Wolf Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 7:27 PM
Thank you, Evelyn, for the sweet comment. Peace, friend. :) Gershon
Koplin Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 8:10 PM
Peaceful..... Great poem! Thank you
Wolf Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 7:13 PM
Thanks for such a nice comment, Mark! Stay healthy and safe. Best, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 6:50 PM
Can just picture the day awakening, hopefully, we'll see many more says like that. Stay safe. Tom
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 7:25 PM
Thank you T.C! You stay well now, Gershon
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 5:06 PM
what wonderful imagery GW, we are still able to go out walking but apart from that its being at home or trying to get food!:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 6:01 PM
Pretty restrictive, but what's the alternative?! What can you do? Stay healthy, Jan! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 4:36 PM
Wonderful lazy day images, dear Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Thank you, dear Kim! Cheers, Gershon
Adams Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 4:22 PM
aside from a few people walking their dogs the neighborhood here seems ghostly too... good write! hugs
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Hope the ghosts are friendly, like Caspar! :) Gershon
Michael Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 4:08 PM
Sound like late evening...when the curtain in the sky closes...
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 5:57 PM
Interesting... re-reading it twice -- you are right on the money! Thanks, Arturo! Best wishes, Gershon
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 3:49 PM
A nice lazy Sunday morning. Good one Gershon...
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Yup. Not too much different from normal today. Thanks, Charlie! :) Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 3:40 PM
I just got back from walking my dog, and this is just how my neighborhood feels - minus the bullfrogs, unfortunately...
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 5:53 PM
There you go --- great to have a dog to walk these days! Thanks, Michelle! :) Gershon
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