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The Day Yawns, Stretches

The day yawns stretches... like a flower petals upturned ghostlike vapors drift away Bullfrogs croak My dog slumbers

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Date: 3/22/2020 10:50:00 PM
When I think of days yawning, I think of summer. Your poem evokes pleasant thoughts and peaceful feelings. :=)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/23/2020 7:27:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn, for the sweet comment. Peace, friend. :) Gershon
Date: 3/22/2020 8:10:00 PM
Peaceful..... Great poem! Thank you
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/23/2020 7:13:00 PM
Thanks for such a nice comment, Mark! Stay healthy and safe. Best, Gershon
Date: 3/22/2020 6:50:00 PM
Can just picture the day awakening, hopefully, we'll see many more says like that. Stay safe. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2020 7:25:00 PM
Thank you T.C! You stay well now, Gershon
Date: 3/22/2020 5:06:00 PM
what wonderful imagery GW, we are still able to go out walking but apart from that its being at home or trying to get food!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2020 6:01:00 PM
Pretty restrictive, but what's the alternative?! What can you do? Stay healthy, Jan! :) gw
Date: 3/22/2020 4:36:00 PM
Wonderful lazy day images, dear Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, dear Kim! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 3/22/2020 4:22:00 PM
aside from a few people walking their dogs the neighborhood here seems ghostly too... good write! hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2020 5:58:00 PM
Hope the ghosts are friendly, like Caspar! :) Gershon
Date: 3/22/2020 4:08:00 PM
Sound like late evening...when the curtain in the sky closes...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2020 5:57:00 PM
Interesting... re-reading it twice -- you are right on the money! Thanks, Arturo! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 3/22/2020 3:49:00 PM
A nice lazy Sunday morning. Good one Gershon...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2020 5:55:00 PM
Yup. Not too much different from normal today. Thanks, Charlie! :) Gershon
Date: 3/22/2020 3:40:00 PM
I just got back from walking my dog, and this is just how my neighborhood feels - minus the bullfrogs, unfortunately...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2020 5:53:00 PM
There you go --- great to have a dog to walk these days! Thanks, Michelle! :) Gershon

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