The Day the Hornet Bit Me!

just back from boomin' .... lost my 'Oregon Hat' rang,
was only used 'ta "gentle pollinatin' bees"
how soon I forget!
late July, when the heat is on,
thick-shelled hornet larvae...
dries and flies!
I heard the buzz....zeroing in from above .... BAM! HIT IN THE HEAD!
a pointed ache begins to swell,
...... but I smile!
I've touched the earth
in
late July's heat!
I smile! ......
I've touched the earth
in
late July's heat! for consideration..... John Heck's 'summer celebration' contest
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April 28, 2009 at 8:52 PM
Made me smile. Although how anyone can smile after a hornets sting has my respect.
Shango Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 8:18 AM
A great poem that is almost an act of worship ... truly beautiful, Jim, and full of your passion and genius ... all the best inthe contest, brother poet, and friend.
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April 13, 2009 at 10:53 AM
ouuuuccchhhh!i smiled too my friend reading this,i ve touched the earth in late july's heat ,what a way-LOVELY AS ALWAYS-CHARMA
Bingham Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 6:44 PM
Ouch! That had to hurt! Hope all is okay. Thanks for your comments. Have a blessed Easter, Ron
Winter Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 2:06 PM
What a great attitude! Love your last two lines. Personally, I'd be crying like a baby, well sort of. I am terrified of those things! Awesome entry! Good luck! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 11:57 AM
This is a delightful entry to the summer celebration contest, James!! John will love the humor......but Ouch!! That stings!! :)
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April 11, 2009 at 8:30 AM
This is a very creative piece Jim...best wishes in the contest.
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