The Day I Swear I Saw An Angel

Pebbles plucked from the sole of my foot driven deep into wounds cut from a path a path leading me to nowhere trying to escape troubles quell worries worries that haunt shamelessly searching for answers to life's questions I come upon a seaside café thirsting I make my way to a corner table the room dimly lit but I can feel I feel the gentle touch of a woman overcome me I taste the sea's salty kiss upon my lips blowing in through the white laced drapery adorning the arched window holding at bay the hot September sun as I await for my glass of Mondavi red a trio softly plays a heavenly tune the sounds of the violin sooth my shattered soul to sleep. Two, three, five, maybe more glasses and I meander my way out to the pearl white beach in hopes of catching a glimpse of her beauty one last wink of her eye before she gives way to a darkened sky Staring off out to the East... was I supposed to look West... I long for one last glimpse one last kiss upon my cheek When suddenly before me She appears how could I ever forget those almond eyes so soft and sweet...love dripping out that little killer smile...almost grabbed my heart ruby red lips an olive glow of heaven, she came. I know speaking of stories and sharing mysteries how she grabbed my arm and couldn't let go we splashed through the surf we could have been the last two left on earth how the skies sparkled how we danced for what seemed like eternity I laid down and she said goodnight Now as I wake with a beaten red face the sun standing high breathing fire down upon me I wonder was it all just a dream or a special memory
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 12:46 PM
TIM, wonderful win. **SKAT**
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 11:38 AM
wow wow wow....amazing poem :) love and peace tim :) to favs
Guzzi Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 4:30 PM
Well you had me going I so enjoyed how the verse tumbled in aspiration! Light & Love
Eastman Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 10:25 AM
I swear! You've got a strong Romance gene running in that soul of of yours... And all I can say is: Go Baby Go! You eeven got Grandpa Troll with a tear streaking down his cheek... WOW! You're amazing... You know...
Lindley Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 7:52 PM
You've been touched my friend. One touched by an angel the world tis never the same! Super 7.....
Trifiatis Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 7:53 AM
A dream or a memory, it doesn't matter my friend, Tim, for as long as you have sensed it and lived it then it is real! Etheric and aesthetic writing deserving the highest rate!
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 3:40 AM
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Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 3:38 AM
Whatever it was a dream or a memory..It definitely sounds beautiful and very romantic. I always forget rating but this poem deserves a 7. On our island We have Marsovin wine too.
Tor Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 1:37 AM
Cleverly done Tim must be a lovely woman to warrant such comparison to a heavenly angel. I really enjoyed reading this majestic piece of yours..
De Carlosa Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 7:38 PM
Wow! This is quite the dream to have a completely beautiful and tempting dream you've had and written.
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 3:50 PM
Memory or dream. I think it is gorgeous!
Ward Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 2:43 PM
A beautiful dream you tell us, Tim. Julia, with my best regards.
Smith Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Thanks Julia
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