The Day I Met You

I hear you in the music that once was 
 noted with affection, like a flower linger 
 that once was; 
 Close to my remote that song clung to destiny
 fate and other things, half strewn
 along the way;

 Come what may 
 I will always remember
 the song that was playing 
 the day you danced me in 

 I hear you in the sound of the waves, 
 as they crash against the shore and are no more 
 close to my heart you will always be, my love 
 fortune played its role, sadness took its tole 

but despite the distance, 
 I will always remember the song they were playing 
 the day I met you, 
 the day you danced me in. 

Vienna Bombardieri aka Mystic Rose 
 March 18, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/18/2019 1:16:00 PM
ohh, your spirit dances with love's melody, vie... how fascinating!...huggs
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Date: 3/18/2019 8:56:00 AM
Music is one of the most powerful tools we have to grab us by the heartstrings and throw us back to a good or a bad memory. Wow! Nice one, Pixie Dust!
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Date: 3/18/2019 7:07:00 AM
Charming romantic memories:Come what may I will always remember the song that was playing the day you danced me in. I hear the longing..the music..the song..Well done, Vienna.
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