The Day I Flew the Coop

Lying on top of the fresh new grass

dandelions gladly cushioned my head

I chewed a grass blade soft, young and sweet

wishing I could stay in my bed

 

The dishes piled high no one cared

kids eyes glazed from too much gaming

the ants were well fed , the dog hungry.. not dead

yet when I said “what a mess!”I heard blaming

 

I pondered and wished I could stay here all day

and wondered if they would notice or even ask why?

The pale sky whitish blue the sun had a hue

the bugs biting my neck, I sighed

 

I jumped up and yelled “that’s it, let them sit!”

I’ll fly away on the tail of my kite

if could just get the right breeze;

I would lift off my feet

the neighbors would just think what a sight!

“Oh for sure she’s lost it!” they may murmur with glee

just watch and see how far she gets with that wind

Just a girl with a kite whose head was not right,

certainly both of her knees will get skinned

 

As I ran and I huffed my lungs sure did puff,

with one great leap I was high in the air

From above high I could see, a world smaller than me

and then I thought “Wait take me back, I do care”

 

As I glided back down, feet touching no sound

I was back where I knew I belonged

I lay back down on the grass, no one noticed or asked

The day I flew the coop… but didn’t stay gone.


:)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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artlyy Avatar
September 18, 2026 at 10:02 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Hoffman Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Very cute and imaginative write Corrina!:)
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