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The Day Begins

Peculiar positions and no one listens To my ever raging rants Try to have a prolific day But I'm trampled by Life's Elephants Is what I feel true or real? Gardens of Doubt, they grow, they bloom Squeeze myself into Oblivion, But, alas! There isn't room!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/22/2013 7:25:00 PM
This one is going to my favorites, very well written and expressed!
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Date: 8/22/2013 9:04:00 PM
Again, I'm flattered, and rather surprised. Although I like this piece, I've never felt like it was one of my stronger poems. To be perfectly honest, the last two lines are really the only reason I like it. But, nonetheless, I am very happy you enjoyed it so much :)

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