Get Your Premium Membership

The Day After

Around and around the room spinnin tummy a whirlin. Fresh coffee brewin head a poundin. Whose this in my beddin oh what a fair maiden. Down with coffee chugin but head still poundin. Did my car get taken? What happen I don't remember nothing from new years partyin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/2/2014 3:08:00 PM
,,.,awe write, Mike!!! huggs,AiyaH ^__^
Login to Reply
Byte Avatar
Michael Byte
Date: 1/2/2014 3:18:00 PM
Thanks AiyaH hope this new year is a good one for you. Your soup friend Michael
Date: 1/2/2014 2:53:00 PM
You shared similar experiences with an undeterminable number of other people who overindulged on New Year's Eve. Good write and happy new year!
Login to Reply
Byte Avatar
Michael Byte
Date: 1/2/2014 3:19:00 PM
Thanks for comments Robert hope this new year will bea ggood one for you. Your soup friend

Book: Reflection on the Important Things