The Day After

Around and around the room spinnin
tummy a whirlin.
Fresh coffee brewin
head a poundin.
Whose this in my beddin 
oh what a fair maiden.
Down with coffee chugin
but head still poundin.
Did my car get taken? 
What happen 
I don't remember nothing
from new years partyin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Torres Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 3:08 PM
,,.,awe write, Mike!!! huggs,AiyaH ^__^
Byte Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Thanks AiyaH hope this new year is a good one for you. Your soup friend Michael
Pettit Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 2:53 PM
You shared similar experiences with an undeterminable number of other people who overindulged on New Year's Eve. Good write and happy new year!
Byte Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 3:19 PM
Thanks for comments Robert hope this new year will bea ggood one for you. Your soup friend
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