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THE DAY AFTER

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the Christmas tree exhales needles. tinsel, unspooled, clings to bare ankles like a ghost. leftovers huddle in foil, their edges curling into salty commas. I unfold the couch, pressing creases from bows meant to be saved~ but the trash bag yawns, hungry for glitter. The cat bats a stray hook across the floor, wondering where the paper mountains went.
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Elliott Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 3:58 PM
Hi Sara, a little bit of sadness when the tree and ornaments, other Christmas decorations come down. So much time prepping for the holiday, then Christmas Day goes by so fast. You captured the sentiment eloquently in this great poem. Happy New Year to you and Bill. Blessings ~
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 12:24 PM
lol ~ takes a lot of effort to recover from the holidays and get our house and ourselves back to normal.
Hind Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 6:06 PM
A nostalgic but beautiful piece, love your simplistic approach
Rose  Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 6:17 PM
lol that sounds very realistic after xmas, :)
Hamilton Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 3:25 PM
A lovely poem Sara that tells it as is hugs Shadow
Hamilton Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 3:23 PM
A lovely poem Sara that tells it as is hugs Shadow
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