The Day

The day that I will stop loving you,
Will be the day that the earth will stop rotating,
The day that the sun will cease from burning,
The day that all flowers go colorless,
The day that the ocean dries out
The day when there is not one radiant star in the galaxy
The day that I stop breathing 
Will be the day that I stop loving you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 29, 2009 at 1:13 AM
Powerful write describing your heart's feelings. Nice work...Raul
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March 29, 2009 at 12:47 AM
It sounds like you really love someone, good luck....Aleera
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