The Dawn So Bright

Oh to hold you in these loving arms, to see your crystal eyes 
Time, it seems, loves to hold the longing heart, yet I will hold you still 
In the setting of the night, we rise to kiss the dawn so bright

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2011 12:29:00 PM

A wonderful win, Christopher. Congratulations!

Elaine George

Date: 5/6/2011 8:14:00 AM

Beautiful Sijo, Christopher. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Elaine George

Date: 5/6/2011 8:14:00 AM

Beautiful Sijo, Christopher. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2011 8:13:00 PM

a beauty indeed, chirstopher! congrats on the high win! :) huggs

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/4/2011 1:41:00 PM

Congrats My friend!!

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/4/2011 12:55:00 PM

Nice Sijo here. Congrats Christopher on your win in this contest, gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations Christopher on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2011 10:24:00 AM

Christropher, it's great to see you in the top five again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/4/2011 10:24:00 AM

Nice one Christopher, I love how you end this piece! Thanks for supporting my contest and Congrats on your 4th place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, wish you all the best. Adeleke