Christopher Steven Coan Poet Sijo

The Dawn So Bright

Oh to hold you in these loving arms, to see your crystal eyes 
Time, it seems, loves to hold the longing heart, yet I will hold you still 
In the setting of the night, we rise to kiss the dawn so bright

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Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2011 at 12:29 PM A wonderful win, Christopher. Congratulations!

Elaine George May 6, 2011 at 8:14 AM Beautiful Sijo, Christopher. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Elaine George May 6, 2011 at 8:14 AM Beautiful Sijo, Christopher. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Nette Onclaud May 5, 2011 at 8:13 PM a beauty indeed, chirstopher! congrats on the high win! :) huggs

Michael J. Falotico May 4, 2011 at 1:41 PM Congrats My friend!!

Gautami Phookan May 4, 2011 at 12:55 PM Nice Sijo here. Congrats Christopher on your win in this contest, gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown May 4, 2011 at 11:31 AM Congratulations Christopher on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite May 4, 2011 at 10:24 AM Nice one Christopher, I love how you end this piece! Thanks for supporting my contest and Congrats on your 4th place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, wish you all the best. Adeleke

John Freeman May 4, 2011 at 10:24 AM Christropher, it's great to see you in the top five again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick May 4, 2011 at 6:23 AM This is stunning..congrats on your big win. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 4, 2011 at 4:46 AM Congrats Christopher on your wonderful winning poem in Sweet Sijo contest with this magnificent entry luv... touching and emotional luv.. enjoy..

Dr.Ram Mehta May 4, 2011 at 4:34 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Adeleke, Christopher

Caroline Cécile Delacroix April 4, 2011 at 10:55 PM Very lovely write. A gift for the one you love. Well done! Be well! Caroline.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 4, 2011 at 6:52 PM Very pasionate and sensual write, Christopher