The Dawn of One Summer Day

Before the birds start chirping
And people will begin rushing
Moments for merely breathing
Not far away from the morning

Tranquilized time of dawn of the day
Diligently waiting for the first sun ray
The sky is yet black and dark grey
Will be brightened without delay

Stars have not gone out of sight
Moon is shining still very bright
But it is not the time of night
The most halcyon time to indite

Cold wind defeating the summer
The dew point is ready to occur
Traffic of the city is at its leisure
Usualy crowded, when day’s sizzler

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/30/2023 4:17:00 AM
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:56:00 AM
Hi there new poet friend, you needed to write a verse whose inspiration came from one of the songs listed in the contest discription...which song inspired this? Please make a note at the bottom of the verse saying which song inspired this? Light & Love
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Date: 11/30/2023 4:16:00 AM
Hey Debby, sorry I was out of this site for some years. Nice to read you reply. Love
Date: 11/20/2008 4:46:00 PM
Your poem is a remarkable painting of a typical morning. Congrats on its well deservedfeature this week. -Fareeda
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Date: 11/30/2023 4:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot
Date: 11/19/2008 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2008 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature of the week, dear Joyti. lainie
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Date: 11/17/2008 2:39:00 PM
Like the last line in this one--made me smile. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/17/2008 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations Jyoti, on the featureing of "The Dawn Of One Summer Day." Vince
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Date: 11/17/2008 6:29:00 AM
A reminder of summer in a late Autumn day! Nicely done. Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/31/2008 5:35:00 PM
great poem, very poetic meaning to me great with words. great poem.
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Date: 8/31/2008 4:08:00 PM
Hi Jyoti! Your poem paints a beautiful picture of a Dawn in Summer. Very impressive, indeed. Thanks for sharing with all of us. -Mohammad
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