The Dawn of One Summer Day

Before the birds start chirping
And people will begin rushing
Moments for merely breathing
Not far away from the morning

Tranquilized time of dawn of the day
Diligently waiting for the first sun ray
The sky is yet black and dark grey
Will be brightened without delay

Stars have not gone out of sight
Moon is shining still very bright
But it is not the time of night
The most halcyon time to indite

Cold wind defeating the summer
The dew point is ready to occur
Traffic of the city is at its leisure
Usualy crowded, when day’s sizzler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Sonnet Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 4:17 AM
Thanks
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August 8, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Hi there new poet friend, you needed to write a verse whose inspiration came from one of the songs listed in the contest discription...which song inspired this? Please make a note at the bottom of the verse saying which song inspired this? Light & Love
Sonnet Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 4:16 AM
Hey Debby, sorry I was out of this site for some years. Nice to read you reply. Love
Moin Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 4:46 PM
Your poem is a remarkable painting of a typical morning. Congrats on its well deservedfeature this week. -Fareeda
Sonnet Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 4:17 AM
Thanks a lot
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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November 17, 2008 at 8:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature of the week, dear Joyti. lainie
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November 17, 2008 at 2:39 PM
Like the last line in this one--made me smile. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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November 17, 2008 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations Jyoti, on the featureing of "The Dawn Of One Summer Day." Vince
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November 17, 2008 at 6:29 AM
A reminder of summer in a late Autumn day! Nicely done. Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie
Burton Avatar
August 31, 2008 at 5:35 PM
great poem, very poetic meaning to me great with words. great poem.
Yamin Avatar
August 31, 2008 at 4:08 PM
Hi Jyoti! Your poem paints a beautiful picture of a Dawn in Summer. Very impressive, indeed. Thanks for sharing with all of us. -Mohammad
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