The Dawn

There is a mist, it rolls like a blanket covering the forest floor
Soft, like gossamer
caressing, warm, damp
a lover’s touch, it strokes the ground
searching the shapes, the contours

the dawn is a wondrous moment in the race of time
it brings promise of a new day
hope from the darkness, a life beginning
as it chases away the night
light brushing the shapes, the contours

shadows of men, turning to face the sun
feeling the warmth, 
wreathed in the soft white mist
legs shrouded
walking among the shapes, the contours

we kneel, searching the earth
brushing away the mist
some crying, all sad
for those we found here
so many shapes, so many contours

Cerska Valley  1995





Entry Date August 4th 2021

Sponsor	Emile Pinet
Contest Name	Imagism
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Darjee Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 7:48 PM
That's a short and sweet one!
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 7:40 AM
What wonderful imagery Graham, it's a delight to read your first poem on soup, welcome to the site, I hope you have fun here:-) hugs Jan xx
Bentley Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 1:10 PM
Thank you for your welcome and comment. When I wrote this there were so many images inside me, this seemed to only way to get them out
Agustin Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Welcome to PS.
Bentley Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Thank your for your kindness and warm welcome
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