Muhammad Imtiaz Poet Couplet

The Daughters of Mother Mary

Chastity is the jewel of a girl and character ,the ornament of a woman
Exalted are the women  of such ornamentation

Like a diamond , like a precious stone 
Not to  expose , A girl of such Tone(Type)

Like a motherland , like a home
The dignity of a girl Mariyume(Virgin Mary)….

Clubs are not the places of  the Holy Frau
The trade of a girl is not worthy of a nation

Not are the sons the whore-monger of daughters!
Like a shield in the battlefield, are the sons of the nation

Character of a girl , the character of a nation
Future builder are the daughters of the nation

Spoiling a girl , is spoiling a nation
Making not marring is the Job of the belle(Beautiful) creation

Purity ,Modesty is marking up(marking up is increase value) a girl
Making her the Mother Mary of the nation

Chastity is the jewel of a girl and; Character,the ornament of a woman
Exalted are the women  of such Ornamentation

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Vera Duggan March 3, 2018 at 7:49 PM Well Muhammad you have hit the nail on the head and me being a woman will agree with all that you have said, so very well written, take care my friend.......Vera Muhammad Imtiaz March 4, 2018 at 12:20 AM Thanks Vera for your sincere and true feedback . This is not only for women.Men are also corrupted so men and women both need correction. I mention women because she makes the family right and she makes the nation right. Take care as well , dear....Muhammad Imtiaz

Debbie Duncan February 28, 2018 at 8:27 PM I really like this one. I think men are the downfall of women. When & if she says no. And he or "they" do it anyway. Then she is branded a whore/outcast. I think you must start teaching kids how to be good humans from birth on. Thank you for reading my words Hidden Path" :) Muhammad Imtiaz February 28, 2018 at 10:50 PM thanks Debbie the right education is necessary...........

Suzanne Delaney February 25, 2018 at 5:18 AM It is true that in the quality of its women, so shall a nation rise or fall- and this is in so many areas - in the way they raise their sons . A peaceful home makes for a peaceful world. Muhammad Imtiaz February 25, 2018 at 6:25 AM thanks Suzanne ...........completely agreed with you........and thanks for being here on my page...really appreciated

Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 25, 2018 at 12:13 AM Females in your life must feel the respect you addressed so beautifully. My mother taught me, "If I acted like a lady, the men would act like a gentlemen" . It worked! I like you do not call myself a poet, but you express you're emotions nicely...and you re comments! bbn Muhammad Imtiaz February 25, 2018 at 1:05 AM i am pleased to have a great feedback from you. I like the quote of your mother and you mentioned it here because you are the example of it. thanks MI

Eve Roper February 24, 2018 at 1:57 PM Enjoyed reading nice tribute to the purity of women Muhammad Imtiaz February 24, 2018 at 2:07 PM Thanks Eve for reading my poems and making lovely and sincere comments. Really appreciated

Faraz Ajmal February 24, 2018 at 1:21 PM It s another well written poem of yours, I really thought that I have visited your page before but I guess that I missed it, so I must say that you have written your poems really beautifully, all of them including this one which shows the current situation of this world and you have given a really nice example on purity, good luck and continue to write such heartfelt poems Muhammad Imtiaz February 24, 2018 at 1:36 PM Thanks Fraz for your sincere comments that are really source of motivation for me to keep on writing ...thanks again

Richard Lamoureux February 24, 2018 at 1:11 PM Men have the capacity to help women maintain their purity when they maintain their own. Sadly weak men and women find each other. You speak of the Virgin Mary, are you of the Christian faith? if so you are you truly blessed as a son of Abraham and a follower of Christ. Muhammad Imtiaz February 24, 2018 at 1:42 PM Yes RIchard , in our case sacrifice is also there. but it depends on the nature and gravity of sin. If the sine is small then mere repentence is enough. But if the sin is big it require a big sacrifice. eg if you kill some one then the sacrifice is you will also be killed as justice ...but if you are repentful and the victims forgive you in return for blood money then it is also allowed. if u did not return some loan , you cannot be forgiven unless you return the loan and ask for forgiveness........All the religions of Abraham have such punishments so far i know. Richard Lamoureux February 24, 2018 at 1:26 PM Thank you both for sharing your thoughts. For me the sacrifice is essential for the remission of sin. Once I have received this gift my actions are to please God whom I am relationship with. I can not earn this love I always possessed it. I was simply in a state of unawareness. Faraz Ajmal February 24, 2018 at 1:19 PM Well I'll help you here coz I know about both faiths,Muslims believe in Jesus and his virgin birth, we believe in all prophets but we don t believe in his crucification and resurrection , we believe that God raised him up alive, secondly we believe that God is one, not triune and Jesus was Messiah , not God, the statement of Deuter my 6 4 Muhammad Imtiaz February 24, 2018 at 1:18 PM Hi RIchard thanks a lot for making beautiful comments... i love mother Mary and Jesus Christ as part of my faith...I am Muslims and believing in Mother Mary ,Jesus Christ and our fahter Abraham all are mandatory in our religion ... thanks again for making a beautiful comment.

Maria Williams February 23, 2018 at 7:54 PM A strong character this woman by the sound of it. You have penned this very well Muhammad....Maria Muhammad Imtiaz February 24, 2018 at 1:13 AM Thanks a Lot dear Maria

Janice Canerdy February 18, 2018 at 2:20 PM The world needs more women like the ones you've so beautifully described, Muhammad! Janice Muhammad Imtiaz February 18, 2018 at 10:54 PM Thank you Janice for your lovely and sincere comments

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton February 11, 2018 at 1:42 PM "Character, the ornament of woman". Profound. Muhammad Imtiaz February 11, 2018 at 11:08 PM Thanks Leanne.........this poem is for females only, otherwise character is for men and women both.

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2018 at 3:12 PM There are sadly not very many women like this left today! Too many are so spoiled.. And it's sad, for truly "the hand that rocks the cradle rules the nation." Muhammad Imtiaz February 10, 2018 at 11:25 PM HI Andrea. I am very thankful to you for your feedback based on reality and nice reference to William Ross......... Sincerely Muhammad

Carole Duet February 5, 2018 at 12:49 PM A very nice poem, Muhammad. I enjoyed reading it and appreciate your point of view regarding girls. Check your soup mail. Muhammad Imtiaz February 10, 2018 at 11:05 PM Thanks Carole for your loving comments.

Becca Teagan February 4, 2018 at 11:32 PM Chastity is the jewel of a girl, I love this. I agree that modesty makes a woman more beautiful. Lovely poem, Muhammad Imtaiz. Muhammad Imtiaz February 4, 2018 at 11:51 PM Thanks Becca for being honest about my words.............. It is honor for me to have words of appreciation from a great poet like you. I am not a poet just sometimes want to write my thoughts.........

Susan Baquie February 4, 2018 at 5:17 PM Beautiful thoughts about the beauty of a girl. Muhammad Imtiaz February 4, 2018 at 10:54 PM Thanks Susan being the first commenter on my new poem