The Darling Knock

What kisses shall she send me tonight?

   how sweet, and swift her love....

   with waltz's late with wanton moods,


Though I might not be there,

   I feel her every move, 

   oft late in afternoon....


When some lovely in day 

   reminds of my little Goddess;

   then pangs of longing, so empty

   to not feel her breath upon my soul,

   so far, to hold....


And lavish her with a servant's zeal ----

   what wasted time without her....

   and worry a world of danger,


To protect her from some blaspheme 

   against her beauty;


Yet upon the rising moon

   (I shall hear that knock)
 
   most glorious a sound as I have heard!

   she in my doorway, swift with love....

   eyes of afternoon and midnight perfumes....

   she of bright stars and rainbow hues

   (and more lovely than the dawn)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:18 PM
This is beautiful, Keith...as are all your poems I have read. Thanks for the nice visit to my page.
Devonshire Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 5:44 AM
Dear Keith, I love the way you can "feel" her presence even when she is not around. I can relate to that. And the way you describe her with "eyes of afternoon and midnight perfumes" is so sensual and passionate. Again you amaze me, my friend! Another fave. Love, Carolyn
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Thanks Carolyn, yes I try to write in spirit, I think this is where much passion comes from writing; a friend said I'm good with 'essences,' thanks for the other compliment you made to arthur on this piece as well I try..... Always, Love~~Keith
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May 28, 2014 at 12:14 AM
Hi Keith, When I read this I too think of Shakespeare , The last time I had a knock on my door, she too was a beauty, she was also a bailiff !! This is an A7 Keith another absolutely excellent write!
Devonshire Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 5:46 AM
Indeed, Arthur. Keith writes like he is from the British Romantic Period. His style is constantly so unique and such a pleasure to read.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Glad you enjoyed arthur!
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 11:49 PM
gosh this reminds me of shakespeare or something. Such romantic words!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 8:51 AM
Love the compliment Andrea, I must be doing something right!
Lindley Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:05 AM
My friend surely Casanova would envy you!!! A truly wonderful slayer of a love letter. One that would melt any ladies heart!! BRAVO AND BRAVO!!!!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Casanova..... hmmmm.... where have I heard that one before? Thanks Robert! Always, Keith :-)
Onclaud Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 9:50 AM
ohh, keith a tender piece dancing on the stream of romance.. greeat work.. huggs
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Glad you enjoyed nette! Keith :-)
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