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The Darkness At Noon

The Darkness at Noon A rapidly dying universe in astronomic confusion Star-studded galaxies swirling in chaotic motion Suns spontaneously self-combusting Planets erratically dancing Moons randomly colliding Black holes voraciously absorbing light There will be darkness at noon. Nature in passionate rebellion Angry and wreaking unprecedented havoc Unexplained and unpredictable phenomena El Niño, global climate changes, earthquakes Catastrophic tsunamis and bleeding volcanoes Comets crazily streaking across the sky Run-away meteors bumped off their predetermined paths Harbingers of universal devastation The darkness is sure to come at noon. Paradise regained and paradise lost Winged angels and horned demons clash in ferocious, eternal battle In an ever-expanding, contracting, and pulsating universe Silvery bolts of primeval lightning Ominous sonic booms of thunder As rabid gods furiously join in the wild feeding frenzy Fleeting glimpses of sweet heaven and a red, fiery hell Then absolute, perfect nothingness Make no mistake – at noon there shall be total darkness. 05-15-2014 Contest: Darkness at Noon Sponsor:Dr. Ram Mehta Placed: 9th

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2015 3:22:00 PM

wow, a great depiction of the coming "end" that you have penned way down here on the list. So glad I went searching for an oldie of your to read. I found this one!!I think I remember this contest and that it never got judged, did it? Surely this would have won.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/15/2015 4:20:00 PM

Andie, thank you so much! This is one of my earlier pieces (early Pandita:-) and I am glad you like it! It was the first contest I ever entered and it was sponsored by Dr. Ram. I was so happy it even placed! Have a nice, relaxing evening! Pandita

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/7/2015 10:10:00 AM

A fine apocalyptic verse! we can hope man wakes up before the end? Light & Love

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/7/2015 8:31:00 PM

Thanks for commenting on this piece, Debbie. Even though we are aware of the consequencies of a world gone wrong, we seem to be heading to the path of self-destruction. Hopefully, we'll heed the signs before it's too late! Warmest regards. Pandita

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/4/2014 4:53:00 PM

really amazing beautifully painted love how this drew for me pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/15/2015 4:15:00 PM

Hi Liam, I am sorry that I am just now seeing your wonderful compliments or I would have responded much sooner! Thank you my friend, this just made my day! Pandita

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/10/2014 11:38:00 AM

Hi there it is all frightening, the more we learn the more we realize the scope of knowledge necessary to understand is beyond a single human. Thanks so much for stopping by my writing. Light & Love

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/10/2014 1:04:00 PM

Thanks, Debbie, I always appreciate your visits and kind comments! Kindest regards.

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 5/16/2014 7:12:00 AM

Wonderful wtite Congratulations on your win! Lori

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/16/2014 10:50:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kindness, Lori. I appreciate it!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/15/2014 7:31:00 PM

Thanks for the support and congrats on the win in my contest,

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/16/2014 6:11:00 AM

That is fantastic! I am happy about placing in your contest! Thank you very much!

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/11/2014 11:24:00 PM

A brilliant contest entry.. Loved the battle between evil and good presented in galactic destruction. "Winged angels and horned demons clash in ferocious, eternal battle"

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/12/2014 6:49:00 AM

Many, many thanks! I love astronomy and I tried to link the "darkness at noon" to a galactic connection.