The Darkest Part

Open that door, down so deep within
                     And let only love flood your heart
Just as the glow of the sun and the moon
                               lights yet the darkest part

Living with hate is not living at all
                         It’s simply a parasites’s dream
Once hate is gone and darkness abates
                      Weightless is how life may seem

Tempting it is, with such human flaw
                            To not even give love a start
Only when finding a way to begin
                               lights yet the darkest part
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Date: 10/4/2024 9:38:00 PM
Your words ring true, my friend. Congratulations on your POTD! I hope you enjoyed your special day of recognition, Mike. My account was unlocked today so this is a belated congrats. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/5/2024 4:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Bill !!!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/5/2024 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Bill !!!
Date: 9/30/2024 9:16:00 AM
Belated Congratulations Mike on POTD!! A simply beautiful, beautiful poem with such great meaning and message! Hatred serves no positive purpose in life. A powerful write my friend and so worthy of POTD! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/5/2024 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Deb, I hope all is well xxoo
Date: 9/26/2024 11:32:00 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, sorry I missed your POPTD. I am here now to wish you a happy special day. Happy Thursday. xxxx. oooo. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2024 9:52:00 AM
So sorry i missed your POTD. Happy Friday. I hope all is well with you. xxxxxx-oooooo. /Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/26/2024 11:48:00 AM
Thank you Darlene xxoo
Date: 9/14/2024 10:04:00 AM
Congrats on POTD! We must not keep hate in our heart, nor mocking or sarcasm that often are its companions.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/26/2024 11:48:00 AM
Thank you Kim xxoo
Date: 9/13/2024 10:52:00 PM
Congrats this truly is a beautiful poem!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/26/2024 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Arthur!!
Date: 9/13/2024 7:22:00 AM
Great poem. Congrats on your POTD.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/26/2024 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Victor!
Date: 9/11/2024 5:49:00 PM
' Living with hate is not living at all. ' So true, Mike. We are human and have many emotions within. Choose the lighter and brighter side. Your thoughts caress gently around my heart. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:48:00 AM
So nice to hear from you, thank you Brandy xxoo
Date: 9/11/2024 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Mike! Such a wonderful positive approach to life - "Living with hate is not living at all' - wise words so beautifully penned! Warmest wishes ~
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:49:00 AM
Thank you Malabika xxoo
Date: 9/11/2024 1:23:00 PM
Wonderful - congrats on POTD. God bless you. love, Gina
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:49:00 AM
Thank you Gina xxoo
Date: 9/11/2024 12:36:00 PM
Thanks for cheering up my day. Very worthy POTD. Congrats! Thanks for sharing.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Benjamin!!
Date: 9/11/2024 11:51:00 AM
Dear Mike, indeed, love and hate are the two most powerful forces in the universe and your impressive verse contrasts them yet conveys that love conquers hate with poetic finesse. A timeless piece and so worthy of POTD honors. Congratulations, my poet friend. Enjoy the accolades! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan xxpoo
Date: 9/11/2024 11:17:00 AM
Thanks, Mike! Now you've given me 'hate to lose,' in addition to weight to lose! As if things weren't tough enough already! Can I call you 'Dr. Gentile' now? I can just see your card: Mike Gentile, DHL, Doctor of Hate Loss... Are we having fun yet?... Congrats on POTD, Mike! Stethoscopes, Body Fat Gauges, and Scales, Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:58:00 AM
Indeed we are having fun!! Keep losing that hate! There're gummies for that now too! Thanks GW!
Date: 9/11/2024 9:42:00 AM
POTD worthy indeed, Mike. :o))
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:51:00 AM
Thank you Ario!!
Date: 9/11/2024 7:41:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula xxoo
Date: 9/11/2024 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations Mike on POTD. Extremely well written. Great message:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:58:00 AM
Thank you Daniel !!
Date: 9/11/2024 6:31:00 AM
Spreading the love Mike. Enjoy your special day
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:47:00 AM
Thank you Tom!
Date: 9/11/2024 6:08:00 AM
Wise words we would all do well to follow, Mike. A important and relevant message, so eloquently penned, in simple to understand language. Thanks for sharing. Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Seeker!
Date: 9/11/2024 5:56:00 AM
Mike, Wonderful thoughts and great poem. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2024 3:47:00 AM
Thank you Warren!!
Date: 9/11/2024 4:40:00 AM
- If everyone's thoughts were like yours, Mike ...it would be a wonderful world ...congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2024 5:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 9/11/2024 4:10:00 AM
Hello Mike, First and Foremost a big congratulations on your well inked poem. Writing about love in a powerful way conveys how love can enter and fill our hearts so that we can transform our inner landscape, overcoming the darkness that may reside within us. Powerful and beautiful at the same time. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2024 4:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Daniel!!
Date: 9/11/2024 2:32:00 AM
Mike, a wonderful poem and message, congratulations on POTD.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2024 4:05:00 AM
Thank you Tania xxoo
Date: 9/11/2024 2:30:00 AM
Wars and conflicts are the products of hate and revenge. The effects of such distasteful attitudes will never end.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2024 4:05:00 AM
It seems that way yet one can hope! Thanks Victor!
Date: 9/11/2024 2:15:00 AM
Congratulations Mike on the POTD. An excellent introduction to dawn.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2024 4:06:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth!!
Date: 9/11/2024 1:33:00 AM
"Living with hate is not living at all It's simply a parasite's dream" Simply awesome! Congratulations for the POTD honour!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2024 4:06:00 AM
Thank you Jeta !!!
Date: 9/11/2024 1:03:00 AM
Lovely poetry, good advice. Congratulations Mike on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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