Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Rhyme

The Darkest Hour-H

He never treated her as a subordinate eve
She was only privileged to get pleasure
And never got the pain of childbirth from him
It was he who ate the forbidden fruit of Eden
Shamelessly committed adultery in old age.

But now that she has left him for a reason
He’s a man of passed-out desires and dreams
Looking at beautiful women do infatuate him
*PEA - “the molecule of Love” floods his brain
Wine, liquor, movies are in the top priorities,
Mind filled with lot of aphrodisiacs, vitamin,
Viagra, zinc, carrots, oysters, garlic and onion.
Exploding coffee machines makes him mad
Gets annoyed when neighbor’s dog barks
Thumping sound of making love irritates him.

At this hour many things provoke his desire
Though blessed with desire, no performance.

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November 15, 2010
Form: Free Verse
Hon. Mention
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This is fictional write.
*PEA or phenethylamine is an alkaloid and a mono amine
**Molecule of Love
Compound Found in Chocolate, Phenylethylamine Demonstrates 
Positive Effects on Mood, Depression, ADHD, Runners’ High, 
and Love & Monogamy

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Skat A November 3, 2015 at 9:13 PM Dr Ram,, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Debbie Guzzi February 22, 2015 at 8:09 PM Women love men for the way men treat them, make them feel about themselves, neither performance nor age affect how a man makes a woman feel special, adored, loved. Forgiveness is possible Ram. Congrad's on your win. Light & love

Skat A February 22, 2015 at 5:47 PM Dr, nice win.................SKAT

Nathan D. February 22, 2015 at 5:27 PM Dr Ram, thank you. Nate

Debbie Guzzi January 1, 2011 at 5:34 PM Certainly a sad state of affairs! And though proformance is not a woman's issue, the ability to raise desire certainly is...and it's a sad state of affairs when the spirit is willing but the body does not comply. Light & Love

Linda Milgate December 11, 2010 at 10:31 PM Congratulations on your placement. This was someone's darkest hour--probably a lot of someones, glad its not yours. Liked the science of PEA included.

Dana Smith December 11, 2010 at 7:01 PM Very interesting write, looking forward to reading more of your work... Dana'lynn

Sara Kendrick November 30, 2010 at 4:36 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown November 29, 2010 at 5:11 AM Congratulations Dr.Ram on your win in Ryland Matthew's "My Darkest Hour" contest. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards November 28, 2010 at 8:31 AM Such a different twist on this contest, and done with and interesting observation! ~ Congratulations!

Wilma Neels November 27, 2010 at 11:44 PM Dr. Ram super congratulations on your placement with this great write ;-) Wilma

Noel Villarosa November 27, 2010 at 10:43 PM Congratulations on your HM, Dr. Mehta. Interesting to read. (^_^) Noel.

Tahera Mannan November 27, 2010 at 7:23 PM An awesome poem Dr. Mehta. Many congratulations for this win.

John Freeman November 27, 2010 at 12:11 PM Dr Ram, Congratulations on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire November 27, 2010 at 8:35 AM Congratulations on your placement in Ryland's contest with this moving poem, Dr. Ram. Peace and blessings, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 27, 2010 at 7:04 AM Congrats Dr. Ram on your wonderful HM in Ryland's contest with this rare beauty entry my friend .. so wonderful your words ... enjoy your special honor today with luv and a happy weekend.. thankxx for your prayers and support during my Ron's health crisis.. he is feeling much better now ...thankxx dear friend..

Mario Giovannelli November 22, 2010 at 12:56 PM don't worry undernath we^all are , i fell being in jamaica

Audonus Taylor November 17, 2010 at 11:38 PM This piece is incredible on all counts. I am in the same contest and now I am frightened at my competition, so thank you haha. Still, beautiful piece of work! and thanks for the congrats on my work. I look forward to more of yours!

Andrea Dietrich November 16, 2010 at 6:44 PM By the way, Dr. Ram. About my "worst poem ever" entry, I made it up on the spur of the moment. Please tell me you did not believe I could ever spell that badly? haha. You should make up a really bad one too.It's super easy to do. I look forward to seeing your"worst" poem. haha. LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich November 16, 2010 at 6:30 PM gosh, Dr. Ram and here I thought you were spilling your guts about your very own "past" and your "present" hmmm, you are supposed to write a TRUE story, you funny guy. this is good but I wish you luck since you admitted it was not true! (I am afraid to post MY darkest hour, TMI: too much information!) LUv, Andrea

David Smalling November 16, 2010 at 11:02 AM A great teacher always teaches, and a great writer always make others dream ... you are both

Wilma Neels November 16, 2010 at 10:12 AM Wow Dr. Ram, glad it is fictional.. Really enjoyed it ;) good luck for the contest with this jewel

Brandi Smith November 16, 2010 at 9:23 AM Hello Dr. Ram Mehta! I really enjoyed this poem...I am still smiling from the read & had to say something about it first. But I also want to thank you for taking the time out to read my poem and leave a comment, it is greatly appreciated!! I will be back to read this again, I am sure of it! Thanks!

Poet Tacito November 16, 2010 at 7:33 AM Fantastic lines here. The imagery is intensely deep here. Very happy to have started reading your work here...

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 16, 2010 at 12:33 AM well whew that this is fictional, Dr. Ram but you sure got me with this-- very intriguing take on Ryland's contest-- wish you the best of luck -- nikko :)

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