The Darkest - Blackest Tuesday (Part Ll)

The whispering begins  Maybe our Fairy God Mother came Sunday night and changed  Ma’am
Oh Dot we can only wish so , I’m a little apprehensive, Al  what does  aperentcive mean I 
asked
It means unsure , unreal piped Joe and Jim  Bobby why aren’t you eating? Is there any rat 
poison
Ma’am probably put it in the eggs Bobby don’t talk like that Billy’s woofing his breakfast down
Of course he’s Ma’am’s  Pet, alright, alright  let’s take advantage of the Fairy God Mother 
Ma’am
Becky tell Millie you and her will dry  George and Harry will put away Dot put everything away
The rest of you guys wipe the table and mop the floor I call wiping the table said Joe (always 
easy)
Hey Pet go upstairs and ask  Ma’am if she needs a fresh towel or anything tell her we’re 
almost done
When Billy came down we were all sitting at the clean table with our hands folded She’s 
coming now
Ma’am walked into the kitchen, wearing  a muti-colored flower dress that matched  to a tee 
her  parasol
Tucked in the bow of her dress  was the black rider’s crop which she always carried with her, 
just in case
Ma’am, you look beautiful, She playfully grabbed George’s ear I’m not going to tell all of you 
again Call
Me “MOM” I don’t want to use this today (touching the Ebony Crop) in fearful uncertain unison 
yes MOM
William go to the living room closet and bring the bag out here “hey guys look brand new 
beach pails”
“Jesus Christ” Did you say something  Robert  we all swallow our breath “ I-i said ”Mom your 
so nice”
Her hand never even moved toward the Crop Maybe Dotty was right, maybe we had a Fairy 
God Mother
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Delaney Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Dearest Harry: The suspense is building here. I had a wicked stepmother myself so I think I know where this is going. Much love. Your S-N & P SuZ
Breidenthal Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 11:23 PM
Very nice build and a great story...continuing to read.... Always, Laura
Chachere Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 7:45 PM
im relieved that you didn't want to eat the food. she is no fairy god mother, obviously she used that to hide herself. im going to make a prediction. in your first part, where you were talking about rat poison. and now in this one, the beach towels. i have a gut feeling that "Ma'am" really did poison the food.knowing that one of the children were going to..you know in a few hours.took them to a pool or the beach, and thats where her sick plan was complete. .is my feeling -reading on
Sweetheart Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 1:25 PM
A nice lead up to part 3 .. intriguing and a bit of adventure added... luv.. "Sweetheart"
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 7:35 AM
thanks for your comment to my Rose poem. Now I am finally getting around to finishing your engaging little story I started last week. I actually have some moments here this morning to do so. Let me read to the end, ok? lUv, andrea
Bono Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 5:38 PM
I am listening but not very good at commenting.I'm just not sure what to say.
Freeman Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 10:40 AM
The peace before the storm continues awhile longer! An interesting story HG. Sincerely, Moses
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Living in childhood fear is NO FUN!!! The good day continues so far. And you have my attention in suspense. DAS-J
Devonshire Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 7:42 PM
I must agree with Barbara, HG. You have created some very "dark" characters and evoked some frightening images. Will you be the next Steven Spielberg? Perhaps Part 3 will hold the key. The suspense is awesome! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 5:25 PM
I'm holding my breath..Oh my , this is wonderful and terrible.. I am ashamed to say I'm waiting for the next episode. Love you HG..Ill be writing to you this evening. BG
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