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The Darkened One

you said you'd never leave me, I should have known it was a lie. you said I was the one you saw in your dreams, but it was only to fund you, you said I was your all and your only, how could I have believed such a lie, now I'm cold and alone, sitting in the corner of this dark room, my thoughts barren, my emotions gone, a silent creature staring at me from the rooms center, "what are you?" I smile, "I am hate, the emotion of forever rage I am despise, the feeling created from jelousy and annoyance, I am anger the emotion that fuels thousands, and I am the end, the one who never survived" he laughed at this "do you fear me?" I closed my eyes for a second thinking did I feel fear? no,pity, pure and true pity was all I felt, "no, I do not, in fact..." I opened my eyes, "all I feel is pit, for your pain shall be eternal." I closed my eyes and listened as silence enveloped the room I reopened them slowly after listening for any movement, all I could now see was a slumped figure in the corner of the room, "as one chapter ends, a new must begin."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/6/2011 3:02:00 PM
I enjoyed your brilliant write with nice expressions on the darkened one, joseph
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Jospeh Z/ Lord-Vile Dupuis
Date: 6/6/2011 3:34:00 PM
once again thanks a million dr. ram my goal is to show the dark side of every ones soul the side that keeps us a little more on the insane side XD
Date: 6/5/2011 9:01:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Jospeh Z/ Lord-Vile Dupuis
Date: 6/6/2011 4:42:00 AM
thanks for the welcome and of coarse i will
Date: 6/5/2011 8:57:00 PM
Yes... This is vary dark, an scary, good write.
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Jospeh Z/ Lord-Vile Dupuis
Date: 6/6/2011 4:40:00 AM
thank you
Date: 6/5/2011 7:58:00 PM
Oh Joseph...makes me want to behave myself! I'd feel terrified seeing "a slumped figure in the corner of the room". Fear, anger and annoyance surely stem from the darkest emotion...yuk!! Would be better to replace apathy with empathy? Best to you and yours, Mikki
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Jospeh Z/ Lord-Vile Dupuis
Date: 6/6/2011 4:41:00 AM
yes well I'm a novelist who's writing a gory horror book so these things are natural to me but thank you so much for you comment

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