Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

The Dark Side of the Moon

The Dark Side of the Moon


I don't mind living alone on the dark side of the moon
if it will keep me from feeling the pain of another wound.
These cold November skies have brought all sins to light.
I need a hiding place where each moment is dark as night.

I will always love you, but my darling, please let me go.
Before I kiss you one last time, I want to let you know
if you ever find the courage to finally set yourself free
look on the dark side of the moon. That's where I'll be.

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Laura Breidenthal November 7, 2015 at 6:10 PM Ooh, another lovely poem. Your lines flow wonderfully and the rhymes are perfect. "I need a hiding place where each moment is dark as night." Awesome line..I can relate to this piece. Well done! Always, Laura Lin Lane November 8, 2015 at 7:13 AM Thanks again, Laura. I do so love it when a comment relates to a particular line. Good feed back, so I appreciate that. ;)

Laura Hay November 3, 2015 at 7:50 AM Very moving emotional poem Lin, warm regards, Laura. Lin Lane November 3, 2015 at 8:18 AM Thank you very much, Laura.

Emile Pinet November 2, 2015 at 9:25 AM This is a strong poem, full of sad emotions. Your rhyming is very good and the theme is consistent throughout. Emile. Lin Lane November 2, 2015 at 9:49 AM I appreciate your kind analysis, Emile. Thanks a bunch.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 2, 2015 at 7:27 AM It flows effortlessly and its beauty augments as the poem goes on, dear Lin! A seven!! Lin Lane November 2, 2015 at 7:54 AM Merci, Deme, for the thoughts and the seven to savor.

Peter Dome November 2, 2015 at 6:09 AM A very sad write I can relate too. Very well written great metaphor, full of emotion. You express yourself very well. A 7 at least. Well done best wishes. Pete, Lin Lane November 2, 2015 at 6:28 AM Sad circumstances give rise to picking up pen and paper. Thank you, Pete.

Mr Gautam November 1, 2015 at 8:23 PM Really nice !! :) Lin Lane November 1, 2015 at 8:48 PM Thank you so much, Gautam. ~ Lin ~