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The Dark Side of the Moon

The Dark Side of the Moon I don't mind living alone on the dark side of the moon if it will keep me from feeling the pain of another wound. These cold November skies have brought all sins to light. I need a hiding place where each moment is dark as night. I will always love you, but my darling, please let me go. Before I kiss you one last time, I want to let you know if you ever find the courage to finally set yourself free look on the dark side of the moon. That's where I'll be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/7/2015 6:10:00 PM
Ooh, another lovely poem. Your lines flow wonderfully and the rhymes are perfect. "I need a hiding place where each moment is dark as night." Awesome line..I can relate to this piece. Well done! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/8/2015 7:13:00 AM
Thanks again, Laura. I do so love it when a comment relates to a particular line. Good feed back, so I appreciate that. ;)
Date: 11/3/2015 7:50:00 AM
Very moving emotional poem Lin, warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 11/3/2015 8:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Laura.
Date: 11/2/2015 9:25:00 AM
This is a strong poem, full of sad emotions. Your rhyming is very good and the theme is consistent throughout. Emile.
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Date: 11/2/2015 9:49:00 AM
I appreciate your kind analysis, Emile. Thanks a bunch.
Date: 11/2/2015 7:27:00 AM
It flows effortlessly and its beauty augments as the poem goes on, dear Lin! A seven!!
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Date: 11/2/2015 7:54:00 AM
Merci, Deme, for the thoughts and the seven to savor.
Date: 11/2/2015 6:09:00 AM
A very sad write I can relate too. Very well written great metaphor, full of emotion. You express yourself very well. A 7 at least. Well done best wishes. Pete,
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/2/2015 6:28:00 AM
Sad circumstances give rise to picking up pen and paper. Thank you, Pete.
Date: 11/1/2015 8:23:00 PM
Really nice !! :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 8:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gautam. ~ Lin ~

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