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The Dark Side of Life

Inner cities churn like a dark raging sea Where fear stalks the rusty broken unchained door where people wear masks of hunger plastered to skulls they walk the cold cracked sidewalks of bewildering darkness and never languish around the corners of shadowed evil where heat from the streets rise like squirming dragons as cars packed like rats pass men selling drugs to the forgotten, some who sleep in wet cardboard boxes surrounded by shattered glass and tossed empty cans that lay scattered in the alley's where death moans despair comes to steal even the hopelessness held leaving nothing to be found in their empty hand as it becomes a clenched fist to a world, that doesn't care 10/9/21 contest Let's Mix it Up-"Life" sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 11/4/2021 2:33:00 PM
Frederic, impressive write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 11/2/2021 1:33:00 PM
Fantastic, moving, cripping. A poem you wish never stops though hope the words would wash away. People need to love people.
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Date: 11/1/2021 8:26:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this muse filled with wisdom on facing a grim reality. God bless you.
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Date: 10/31/2021 11:09:00 AM
Dear Friend Dear Poet, it is with great admiration and appreciation that I return with my heartiest congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest with this potent poem of expressive social commentary. A harrowing poetic piece of immense metaphorical beauty, the depth and strength of your pen forces darkness into the light. Warmest wishes, dearest Frederic.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/31/2021 12:01:00 AM
"fear stalks the rusty broken unchained door" Great symbol. The entire poem gives a feeling of inner aches. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/23/2021 5:34:00 AM
Excellent write, full of stark images. I especially like the last image of the clenched fist to a world who doesn't care. Also, the musical score added a depth of drama to the piece.
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Date: 10/10/2021 10:06:00 AM
Dear Poet Dear Friend, your profound pen yields a depth of creative intelligence coupled with an incisive poetic artistry that is truly impressive. A piercing, soulful piece, beautiful in its penetrating darkness; "despair comes to steal even the hopelessness held".. just wow! A haunting masterpiece and a huge fav! The mixed forms blend seamlessly and with immense impact! Best wishes for a win and my warmest wishes for you, Frederic.. ~Susan
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