The Dark Side of Life

Inner cities churn like a dark raging sea
             Where fear stalks the rusty broken unchained door

           where people wear masks of hunger plastered to skulls
           they walk the cold cracked sidewalks of bewildering darkness
           and never languish around the corners of shadowed evil
           where heat from the streets rise like squirming dragons
           as cars packed like rats pass men selling drugs
           to the forgotten, some who sleep in wet cardboard boxes
           surrounded by shattered glass and tossed empty cans
           that lay scattered in the alley's where death moans

                                despair comes to steal
                            even the hopelessness held
                            leaving nothing to be found
                                in their empty hand
                            as it becomes a clenched fist
                            to a world, that doesn't care


10/9/21 contest Let's Mix it Up-"Life"
sponsor Constance La France
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La France Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Frederic, impressive write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Liguori Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 1:33 PM
Fantastic, moving, cripping. A poem you wish never stops though hope the words would wash away. People need to love people.
Agustin Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 8:26 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this muse filled with wisdom on facing a grim reality. God bless you.
Ashley Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 11:09 AM
Dear Friend Dear Poet, it is with great admiration and appreciation that I return with my heartiest congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest with this potent poem of expressive social commentary. A harrowing poetic piece of immense metaphorical beauty, the depth and strength of your pen forces darkness into the light. Warmest wishes, dearest Frederic.. ~Susan
Alex Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 12:01 AM
"fear stalks the rusty broken unchained door" Great symbol. The entire poem gives a feeling of inner aches. Congratulations!
Capitano Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 5:34 AM
Excellent write, full of stark images. I especially like the last image of the clenched fist to a world who doesn't care. Also, the musical score added a depth of drama to the piece.
Ashley Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Dear Poet Dear Friend, your profound pen yields a depth of creative intelligence coupled with an incisive poetic artistry that is truly impressive. A piercing, soulful piece, beautiful in its penetrating darkness; "despair comes to steal even the hopelessness held".. just wow! A haunting masterpiece and a huge fav! The mixed forms blend seamlessly and with immense impact! Best wishes for a win and my warmest wishes for you, Frederic.. ~Susan
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