The Dark Poet

The Dark Poet

The poet losing touch with life
Faces fear untold
Reality just slips away
Powerless to make it stay
When his demons seize a hold 

Deep dark thoughts pervade his mind,
Worms infect his brain.
Empty void of utter darkness
Shut away from light.
No one understands his pain.

Feelings twist, turn, and tangle,
Things he can’t explain,
Oozing mud and pull of death
Beckon to a place beyond.
Is he going quite insane?

Digging, delving, dread... then hope
In his troubled crown.
Memories of long ago
Things he thought he didn’t know 
Walls come crashing down.

Time will tell if he will heal,
Escape this dark perdition.
Strength and courage he must have
Going down this lonely path
In search of his redemption.

~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/14/2011 5:42:00 PM
Very dark stuff Margaret, im in Brisbane yet:) just saw an Aussie slipping by, on ya babe, its bloody good to try:) Don
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Date: 6/2/2010 7:26:00 AM
this is an awesome write and a winner either way! well done. thanks so much for your thoughtful congrats. love, shar
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:07:00 PM
ONe of the best from what I have been reading for this contest, Margaret! thanks for your response while i was away. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/19/2010 9:41:00 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Margaret. The best to you in the contest. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 9:54:00 PM
very nice one
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Date: 5/18/2010 9:04:00 PM
Good one Margaret. Perhaps its a path better left untravelled. I think its a good challenge to ask people without a dark side, like most of us here I think, to try on this mask of blackness. I like your rendition. Joe
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