The Dark Maiden

In the garden of evil
A dark maiden wishes kisses
She summons a blond princess
Against her inner wishes

In the midst of poisonous berries
In the middle of sharpened thorns
She is grabbed by the dark maiden
Her feelings towards her scorned

Through the dark magical orb
Hummingbirds to the rescue go
They hover to show their wrath
But the dark maidens powers show

They are followed by beautiful butterflies
And in turn they too succumb
This dark maiden and her powers
Has made natures beauties run

The princess closes her eyes
To think of the world summoned from
As the dark haired maiden wilts
Against a pure and power strong

The fallen hummingbirds
And the butterflies who fell
Returned through the light
As the princess would finally tell

There is no room for the dark
In a world so colourful and free
To be with the grace of such creatures
Who followed to look after me

I hope that this will be a lesson
If others hear my story
Fight against the dark maiden
Over nature, she will never have glory




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/9/2010 4:04:00 PM
Great imagery James and a wonderful story to tell .. the age old good vs. evil.. enjoyed this episode in poetry..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/8/2010 3:02:00 PM
Charming one, James! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/8/2010 1:13:00 PM
I enjoy reading this wonderful poems of yours..the dark maiden represented Evil,,and Evil always find its end..near fair Princesses of kidness and love..lovely..Charma
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Date: 3/7/2010 3:27:00 PM
Glad that the fair maiden won in te end. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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