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The Danger of Sunglasses

I knew a young lad from the village of Trent He wore dark sunglasses wherever he went Ladies couldn't see his blues, So they focused on his fuse 'Til one day his vision was entirely spent.
written November 30, 2021

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Date: 12/1/2021 4:04:00 AM
Ah, I never did like sunglasses on people especially worn indoors. If I can't see the eyes then I can't see the soul behind the face, nice one Milton, take care, :)
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 12/1/2021 8:25:00 AM
There certainly is some merit to your approach, Vie. I agree.
Date: 12/1/2021 2:41:00 AM
Too long under the shades, Nicely done Milton
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 12/1/2021 8:27:00 AM
Apparently. (chuckling)
Date: 11/30/2021 9:07:00 PM
"they focused on his fuse" - hmmmm. So many curious thoughts came to my mind here. I am smiling big.
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 11/30/2021 9:56:00 PM
Oh my, you don't think I'd write something like that, do you? (chuckling)