L Milton Hankins Poet Limerick

The Danger of Sunglasses

I knew a young lad from the village of Trent
He wore dark sunglasses wherever he went
Ladies couldn't see his blues,
So they focused on his fuse
'Til one day his vision was entirely spent.

written November 30, 2021

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Mystic Rose Rose December 1, 2021 at 4:04 AM Ah, I never did like sunglasses on people especially worn indoors. If I can't see the eyes then I can't see the soul behind the face, nice one Milton, take care, :) L Milton Hankins December 1, 2021 at 8:25 AM There certainly is some merit to your approach, Vie. I agree.

Joseph May December 1, 2021 at 2:41 AM Too long under the shades, Nicely done Milton L Milton Hankins December 1, 2021 at 8:27 AM Apparently. (chuckling)

Caren Krutsinger November 30, 2021 at 9:07 PM "they focused on his fuse" - hmmmm. So many curious thoughts came to my mind here. I am smiling big. L Milton Hankins November 30, 2021 at 9:56 PM Oh my, you don't think I'd write something like that, do you? (chuckling)