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The Dancer Swirls

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Dancing with vigour the dancer swirls Sweat glistening, passions inside rose Catching shadows as within skirt furls Around my heart as locks you impose Sweat glistening, passions inside rose Fixation befalls, this beleaguered soul Around my heart as locks you impose I glimpse your eyes, of blackened coal Fixation befalls; this beleaguered soul As within me; the heart that you stole I glimpse your eyes, of blackened coal My heart collapses, as it seeks its goal As within me; the heart that you stole Spirits raging, within your heated eyes My heart collapses; as it seeks its goal Beguiling me, with all of your false lies Spirits raging, within your heated eyes Never to be free until the fire subsides Beguiling me; with all of your false lies Atoms split; as our souls make divides Never to be free until the fire subsides Catching shadows; within clothes furls Atoms split; as our souls make divides Dancing with vigour, the dancer swirls

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Date: 1/27/2020 8:06:00 AM
This was really nicely done. A beautifully written poem that is enchanting and filled with movement.
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Date: 1/26/2020 4:44:00 PM
You captured enchantment in your write...I like it...
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